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ROBCakeran53


"Ladies and Gentlemen, take my advice. Pull down your pants and slide on the ice." ~ Dr. Sidney Freedman, M*A*S*H S3 Ep5

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What's this? An entire world inhabited by talking equines? This inner dimensional portal full of bees outta put a stop to that.

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What the hell...?

So...

Doctor Bees is going to retire and... Fluttershy is the chosen replacement?

...I've seen weirder.

~Skeeter The Lurker

What's this!? An orphanage full of fillies and colts depressed about their lack of parents? A healthy dose of BEES should cheer them up!

Silliness aside, I may give this a read.

WOAH! From the author that gave us a sensation greater than FoE, greater than Cupcakes, Greater than the tiny little red (died black) and black Alicorn named Nyx... Greater than Cakebutt's flank even, comes a new story!

I said it yesterday, but it bears repeating: the internet is wonderful sometimes.

You wrote this when you were drunk, right?

don't think I forgot about that. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Shouldn't this story bee a tragedy? :trollestia:

Oh good god. This can only end well. :rainbowlaugh:

My God, ROB, this is as masterful as it gets in both dialogue and delivery in jokes.

"Knocking is for sellout pussy superheroes like Superman. Real crime fighters use any and every chance to show their heroism, strength, and manliness, no matter how mundane the task may be.”

Priceless. :rainbowlaugh:

I knew it was only a matter of time 'till a fic about good ol' Dr. Bee's came out!

Rob, you lovable drunk. You wrote a thing again.

It is beeyond Fabulous!! TOO BEE OR NOT TOO BEE!! ... continued, because it is actually very enjoyable to read :moustache:
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Rob, I love you.
From, Bob.
:heart:

Surprisingly a new story by this guy :trixieshiftright:

But unbeknownst to her,

truly worthy or not of being my sidekick

we do not simply choose to become what we are, but we are chosen to become what we are meant to be chosen to be

The audacity! :pinkiegasp: How can this bee? :raritydespair: All these missed opportunities for BEEEEEEEEES! :pinkiecrazy:

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you come out with a new story, and this is what it is. I like.

What's this? A fan fiction about Dr. Bees? My camper-van full of bees should put a stop to that!

Sweet heavans above,

I didn't know you were a Harry Partridge fan, this calls for a large influx of bees!

Sees the tite and the picture

Hell Yes.

Sees who the author is.

Hell Freaking Yes. My Little Dashie got me into fanfiction. I didn't cry as much as though, but the feels I felt after reading stayed with me for almost a week. Now your bring my favorite Harry Partridge cartoon to Equestria. Thank You for beings so awesome. I'll return... with feed back.

Sees the title.

HIM. YES. GOD YES.

Sees other stories.

HE MADE My Little Dashie? :pinkiegasp:

I got to say, I love how you added depth to Dr. Beez. Though his origin story is a'lot creepier than I thought. Though it still wasn't as creepy as that "Father and Son" picnic from the ordinal short.

Have you sampled the platter.

I never thought I'd say this, but: This looks like a job for Pinkie Pie, all right.

3655356

It was only a matter of time...

Beautiful.
Simply beautiful.

Now all we need is a Starbarians crossover.

I laughed, I cringed, I laughed some more, I began typing this, I hit the favorite and like buttons, and I will soon hit "Add Comment."

ROBCakeran53
Moderator

3651693 Maaaaaaaybe :twilightblush:
3651899 Thank you. That was one of my favorite lines in this chapter, but trust me when I say I got some even better ones coming up.
3652317 :heart: you too Bob.
3652560 I know I left out a lot of good chances to use that, but I didn't wanna over use it. Plus I was trying to keep the bee words in Dr. Bee's dialogue and out of the narration.
3654614 Ha ha, yeah...
3655037 You know, it's funny you say that. I bounced around a few different ideas as to his origin story. The other idea that I almost used was a lot more timid, but I thought about that scene with the picnic and was like "Naw, I think this'll fit more."

3661165 :twilightoops: But... two of those examples are Dr. Bees' dialogue. And the narrator is the one who draws out the word "Beeeeeeees" in the source material. So....
...
I believe the conclusion I'm trying to make is that this Saturday's episode was AWESOME! Woooooooooo! :yay:

3651651
Oh no! Beeware of all the BEEEEEEEEESSSSS!

“It is quite alright. I have left the fate of my world in the capable wings of my highest ranking official, The Buzzinator.”
BACK ON EARTH

“OH MY GOD, WHAT IS THAT THING?”
“RUUUUUN! IT’S COMING THIS WAY!”
“IS THIS ONE OF THAT CRAZY BEE GUY’S EXPERIMENTS???”
From around a street corner, a massive robotic bee, easily twenty stories tall, stomped on a car, crushing it like a flower.
“BUZZ. KILL. DESTROY. STING.”
From its antenna, lasers rained down onto the street full of fleeing, screaming people.
BACK ON EQUESTRIA

“They will be just fine.” Doctor Bees nodded reassuringly.

*Takes off glasses, sighs*

Rob, what can I say? Other than point you in the direction of, once again, my previous comment.

What's this?!

A comment section for such a unbee-lievable story with nary a bee-themed avatar to represent our honey-making heros?!

My google search of BEE PICTURES ought to solve the problem!

You captured the mood and tone of Super Hero Parody perfectly! Had me laughing the whole way, Especially with how you wrote Fluttershy and the narrator. :rainbowlaugh:

Harry Partridge would bee proud! :trollestia:

Can't wait for more!

Lol, I remember a friend of mine was watching a SMITE video on the Aztec god of Bee's and took it upon himself to show me DOCTOR BEE! I flipped out when I saw this fic. Amazing! Have a favorite and like dear boy!

Wasn't too sure about this, I loved the original video but I was skeptical how well it would translate in a fic.

Then I see this

Chapter 1: A New Beegining

And bees attacking that bunny.

Oh dear lord. What have you done?! :rainbowlaugh:

3655356 Lets double team this bitch....

That was certainly something.

Hmmmm. I hope this updates soon.

ROBCakeran53
Moderator

3857497 Derp, you got me! I'll get to fixing that, thanks.


4334824 I'm working on it, slowly for sure, but it's getting there.

4353266 Slow updates? Sounds like something some Beeeeeeeeees could... actually no, bees would just make things worse. Carry on!

Comment posted by Synthetic Soul deleted Sep 11th, 2014
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