The Satin Slipper Sweet Shoppe- the favorite hangout spot of many a mare and stallion, has just hired a ditzy new employee. Follow the misadventures of this mare as she deals with all types of crazy customers!
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Paradise Oasis
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You misspelt 'Prologue', by the way.
I liked you better Fizzy when you had Wind Whistler's personality traded with yours. It's SAD you had Wind Whistler's logic and reasoning and didn't learn a dang thing.
“Just be here at six ‘o clock tomorrow morning for training.
Six AM? 0-0 I'm surprised she didn't go negative at that. Or oversleep on her first day at the job.
The Satin Slipper Sweet Shop looked like a large white lace ballet shoe,
And the G3.5 Ponyville was considered garish?
This is going to be interesting.
The Pun. I love it! I hope you have fun writing this!
So in this chapter, we have a Cloudcuckoolander in Fizzy and probably what will become an Obstructive Beaurocrat in Truely.
I love the ending. Very G1 in spirit.
And wow this fight between cherries and apples has gone on...what over a thousand years?
To think that ponies can't get any more oblivious or idiotic after the Ponyville Fair.
Even with WW, Gusty, and Shady's help, Fizzy can't keep the shop organized. Scoops is going to kill all of them.
What a mess!. This is going to take a serious friendship montage to fix. I hope one of them has glue to fix those dishes. Though it might be better to throw them out and hope Scoops doesn't notice. Otherwise, Fizzy had better get on the ball or its bye bye employment!
Oh Fizzy, you lovebird.
Racism, racism everywhere.
Is this intentional or a typo? Either way, I have a feeling that Fizzy will be rather notorious by the end...
Arrr, she be a pirate!
Fun chapter; it's interesting how your versions of Lickety-Split and Truly are respectively mellowed out and amped up, in comparison to the show.
The sudden turn in their additudes seems a bit abrupt, but otherwise, pretty good chapter. I like the dance-party ending.
Still, pretty good chapter. Also, Fizzy is doomed.
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Thanks for the reviews!
I will say, everything you mentioned was intentional 
Ooooooh, Myyyyyy...
Well, that was interesting. I take it you're not going by the Comic's explanation of the Twinkle-eyed Ponies' origins? Anyway, I like the interaction here, and Gingerbread's defensiveness was a nice touch.
EDIT: 3524814 No problemo, and alright!
*Cringes*
Ouch.
Wow, talk about drama.
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Well drama in the way Spongebob has drama.
They're lucky that they were alone. Otherwise, there could be a lot of embarassments.
I seem to see more and more of Pinkie Pie in Fizzy.
It reminds me of that date from Legend of Korra. Minus the fart lol
That poor turkey. It's weird how FiM deals with its non pony animals. Are they all intelligent or just some of them?
These ponies never get a break from trouble, do they?
Hahah. I love how Heart Throb's accent appears to be fake. Does she put it on just to sound rich?
Climbing on top offff....whaaaat?
Hello menacingly convenient waterfall!
Hmm.
On one hand, BLS is certainly obnoxious, and you've done a good job of making her just as unlikable here. That being said, though, the ending just seems a bit to... vindictive? Cruel? Idunno, but I didn't really agree that the paddle was the best action to take, or even close to it.
3583424 Word of God once said that the morals in his stories are similar to the 50's. Think Loony Tunes.
Fizzy is indeed smarter than she seems!
3592456 Ah, gotcha.
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Great chapter, although there are still some grammar errors here and there, and the change of heart of the two ponies before the end was really abrupt and felt rushed.
Still, good work.
Keep on hustling, good nigga.
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Still think Baby Lickety shouldn't be paddled?
Adeiu, Satin Slipper
Dun dun dun! I sense a dramatic showdown!
Hopefully Truly isn't enough of a jackass that she'd want to continue this. Also Baby Lickety Split. Where is that hellspawn? She should feel bad for what she did.
3659669 I don't know, she seemed quite vindictive towards most ponies.
Awesome story! It's got a few grammatical errors, but not too bad. Fizzy's personality is great in comparison to the show, and I never liked Baby Lickety-Split anyway, so I don't mind her aggressive punishment. However, it was a little rough for a baby. Truly's personality is great, so overall good job.
Although Baby Lickety, though snobbish, doesn't deserve a paddling. Maybe a time out or something more fitting! ;)
Shouldn't Fizzy have told Lickety-split that Truly was the one causing problems? I mean other customers saw her and if she came in there often, she would know that Fizzy is new. Of course this has never stopped Truly from being a drama queen and a royal pain in everyone's ass.
Think you meant to say earth pony. So, she impressed Mimic huh? Suh-weet! Loved how you made them do the Samba at the end! :3 Very beetlejuice-esque! Shake senoras!
Oh no!
Lmao!
Who was that jerk?
Yowch!
*facepalm*
Oh yes. They're perfect for each other! Rofl
Nuuu! Not Mr. Chubbikins!
Sounds like bad news. Wonder what happened?
Uh...well...oops!
Bwahahaha!!! X'D That'll teach em to meddle and snoop!