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Paradise Oasis


Royal librarian of Dream Valley, writer of Ponykind's greatest generation!

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From across time, Two different ponies named Twilight are drawn into a mystery that transcends the ages. Now, they and their friends must work together to save both past and future from the a terrible threat.

Cover art by RayvnKarasu

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 128 )

Very interesting, gonna track this ^^

I find the concept of G4 happing long before G1 intreging. Continue.

I just read the description for this and it sounds alot like Sonic Generations plot line. Just saying

Arggg time stream G4 befor G1....head...going....to....explode:twilightangry2:

Still having issues with the whole G4 preceding G1 thing but it is pretty good nice matchmaking in the last section

Majesty, I was pissed off when Magic Star gave away Dream Castle too. To FIVE GRUNDLES. FIVE GRUNDLES do not need a castle anyway!

Great story so far!

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That's what I thought too. Having G1 in G4's future seems so very, very wrong. Then I read further and it started to seem brilliant. Still unsettling, but brilliant.

so spike aged but at the same time didn't grow up? that doesn't make much sense

:raritycry::raritydespair: that's so sad why you write so depressingly good.....bring on the next chapter

More! More! More!

And now we're starting to merge even more into the G1 continuity.....

...now i think tomorrow i will watch G1 so i know what's going on. until then i'm gonna go sleep

no Bronco you asshole i hate you. Love and Tolerance isn't enough!

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Goood GRAVY a Time Travel/immortaility/less aging spell ? :pinkiegasp:

Now that is something you don't see or hear everyday. It this the reason why Applejack look like herself when it came to your other stories ? :applejackunsure:

If so than that is a genius idea to use. :ajsmug:

Pleaese do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.

Nice reveal and interesting side-effect to Apple Jack's immortality. :ajsmug:

Yet, I wonder if there was any way for AJ to change the past to help preserve the future for the better. :applejackunsure:

Nice udpate and look into where the (past)/future Twilight will go next. Yet, I wonder if the Element of Harmony could still react to AJ pressence ? :ajsleepy:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one. :ajbemused:

If this is Lyra.Lyra then where is Bon-Bon ? :unsuresweetie:

Nice way of showing how the Sea and Flutter ponies were establish, but I do wonder how they took it when they realize they were trick and that the real Princess Celestia died ? :duck:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.

Every time you change from the past to the present (or vice-versa), I think of this music:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fk9L31c4ugk

So that was the start for Dream Castle and Dream valley...:derpyderp2:

But how did Applejack become immortal ? :ajbemused:

And how did Spike take it when he learned Rarity go married ? :moustache:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one as it feels that love is in the air. :yay:

WOW, that was truly a touching moment between Spike and Applejack, the last of old Equestria. :ajbemused:

I must say I was sadden and shock with how Spike told AJ of his last days with Rarity. It made me :raritycry: .

I mean it was a touching moment between the two old friends. :moustache:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.

I didn't realize you had this story here, as well as on FanFiction.net. Thanks for continuing to keep at it!

Now I want to see how Lighting takes it when Applejack tells him the truth about herself and her real history...I wonder if he will stay with her then ? :ajsmug:

Intersting update as it seems that the past and the present are coming together as fast as this storyline goes. As it seems that the future Flutterponies fates are finally bieng discovered within this chapter.

Now I wonder what will Celestia think when she learns of the troll attack on the city ? :unsuresweetie:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one. :twilightsmile:

Great update towards this wonderful storyline of yours.

First off, nice moment between Lighting and Applejack and how he is understanding when it comes to the age of Applejack and her connection to the old Equestria times. :ajsmug:

Also nice moment between Twilight and her love, Torando....I must say I do feel a bit bad for the stallions for leaving their familes to go off fighting.:ajsleepy:

Still it was a nice way to show just how the two gender ponies mash up with their life bond lovers.

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as I cannot wait to see what happens next chapter and how the gang will fare against the surprise that Triek has for them. :ajbemused:

I think I know whats up with AJ:ajsmug:

at least suprise and posy got away right.....right?

So ... did the future change? Are we about to find out? I guess so!

Thanks for working so hard and making so much progress on this!

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I dunno... I haven't really seen much interaction between the "two Twilights" for me to jump to that conclusion...

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It's true that there is nothing to suggest that has happened, but it does seem that the villains in the past have been stopped for now. Unless the whole story is going to pick back up again with another attack by Midnight in the past, there would seem to be no cause for the apocalyptic events that happened in the future timeline (the destruction of Sweet Apple Acres, the death of the Princesses, etc.). I dunno. I really have no idea where the story is going next. :derpytongue2:

Well, that was laughably foolish for the Chancellor to do.

Leaving the Rainbow of Darkness in the hands of someone like that is obviously a bad idea.

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

Wow, this is true maddness as Triak tries to prevent Twilight of the future from having any type of help at all for this final fight. :fluttercry:

Only a miracle can save her now.

Also I wonder....whatever happen to :derpytongue2: in the future anyway ?

So....I guess this means that AJ will finally be able to age normally now. I also guess that Midnight's evil side is finally going to Tartarus where it belongs.

Nice ending and great connection to the recent Season 2 finale of the show. I mean who knew that Masquerade and her offspring were a part of the Changlings squad from far Equestria ago. :twilightoops:

Now I wonder of the fate of :ajsmug:, I mean is she not immortal anymore and can sort of age normally ?

Also While she may forget bits of the past, does she even know of the past living on in the present time ?

While the future is here and now, it still holds small bits and pieces of the past long ago...I know it's hard to live in the present and try to forget about the past, but do you think that in some way some small bits of Sweetie Apple Arces, at least the sign, could be a present in AJ's life, at least to try to keep up with the family traditions of long ago. :ajsleepy:

Still, it was a nice an interesting story from start to finish and I'm glad to read it all.

Thank you so much for a wonderful tale. :twilightsmile:

Nice use of changelings with Masquerade! Great story, really fun to see G1 and G4 interacting!

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I'm guessing "baby dragon" is a synonym for "dwarf dragon" or "pygmy dragon" or whatnot.

Okay... if you want a review...:ajsleepy:

BAIT AND SWITCH.:pinkiecrazy:

Totally. Halfway through you decided you didn't like time travel and wrote it out of the plot and lampshaded it with the future ponies somehow knowing Applejack would kill them all if she succeeded. Then it finished up with a really convoluted war thing that seemed to pull in new characters and elements left and right. Sort of like a science fiction soap opera. :unsuresweetie:

I thought at least the future interference would lead to Equestria surviving the extra 200 years it was already recorded as surviving.

Then there was this whole lifebond thing that I didn't really understand that never really went anywhere. Or was resolved off camera. Or in another fic or something?

But before it sounds like I'm just whining, well, it was usually fun to read at least. And a soap opera plot is a tried and true method of keeping readers interested. :twistnerd:

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Thank you for the review! ^^ I do apprciate it!

As to your points... I don't like time travel, but like Glory said, it's hard to do, and nearly impossible-look at Twilight Sparkle's 'warning' to her past self from the show . Twilight Shine realized AJ would try and wipe the future out because she remebered the little converstaion that had gone back and forth between Her and Glory when they were leaving the royal paradise, and AJ's reaction to it. She had also suspected minor lingering corruption from the rainbow of darkness when Tirek had turned AJ into a dragon in 'Rescue from midnight castle'. She realized what AJ was doing when she put two and two together when Applejack went missing. Also it's pretty much a given if AJ sucseeded in stoppeing the fall of Equestria, Ponyland and it's ihabitants would never exist.

As to the lifebond, that's a running thing in my shared pony-fic universe to explian some of the odd quirks in pony realitionships on the various MLP shows

When I looked at the comments and saw that you put G4 before all the other generations, I thought it couldn't possibly work. However, you've made it work and I"m very pleased with the result. I love how you used the old Applejack's personality instead of just making her like G4 Applejack. I'm quite interested in this idea.

When you say review, do you mean "YES I LOVE THIS" kind of review, or do you mean "make that it's into an its" kind of review. Because I will do both! :pinkiehappy:

I would say that I don't think Katrina would ever work for someone else, but since you said the rainbow of darkness made everyone evil again, I can believe it also made Katrina content to be second best. Though I still suspect she wants to be the one in command, at least secretly.

I love that you mentioned Sundance. She needs more love! :pinkiehappy:

And I actually am starting to get into this idea of G4 going to G1. I still think it's the other way around, but you've still created a pretty intriguing storyline.

I didn't expect that! Whoa this just gets better and better!

Why is Spike purple?
I love how you've incorporated all this stuff from the old series, especially all the material from the pilot. That was the one I always liked the best.

FINALLY someone other than me who thinks Pinkie would disreguard any attempt at flirting!

Double inside out loop...now that was the part in my version of the pilot that skipped so I could never tell what she was actually saying until I saw the video on youtube...I see what you did. You just paired up all the mane six except Applejack.

That got suddenly sad. Normally that would be too much of a transition to deal with but...you timed it perfect. :fluttercry: And I hate you for it.

Spike, Applejack, you know why you're special? Because you're the only ones throughtout the mlp universe to keep your full and unmutilated names.

And I bet it only gets worse from here...:fluttershbad: :raritydespair:
but you know I'm still going to read it

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