2146045 Ah, in your story you use a lot of exclamation points in your dialogue which gives off the impression that your character is shouting alot.

2146045 Oh! Umm I'd hafta go back and read the comment

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I asked you about a comment you left on my story ages ago and you still haven't answered. I'm still confused about what you meant.

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Huh?

No seriously, scream and shout? What? I don't understand.