Another successful gig, another wild after party. Vinyl is absolutely trashed while on her way home from the Nightclub she should have left hours ago. One drunken idea and a crash landing later, our one and only Dj Pon3 finds herself face to starry face with a creature from beyond her world.
With the creature near death and begging for help, the mare agrees a bit too quickly to lend a hoof by any means necessary. Hopefully she doesn't regret this decision when she wakes up the next morning with a new tenant living in her noggin. One Vinyl and two minds, what could possibly go wrong?
AN: The cover art is by Johnjoseco. He's awesome and on Deviantart so go tell him hes cool and stuff. The picture was modified by my friend Flying Wingnut, and so is not the original.
Special Thanks: Thanks to all my friends on Skype that preread and supported my work, you all know who you are! And a super special thanks to my editor Onetrickpon3.
This story is 100% approved by Twilight's Library!
“I… I can’t get drunk!”
Welcome to a minor's world
Brace yourselves...XIla/Scratch clop incoming. Once I have the time
Liking it so far. Looking forward to chapter 2 (which I still need to preread :P )
Yay!
Interesting concept. I look forward to seeing how you develop it.
3454043 I look forward to you seeing how i develop it
I love vinyl and I can't wait to read this, i just put this in my read later list :)
Cannot wait til chapter two! :D Great starter! Faved
That last line settled it, I'mma follow this.
The premise sounds an awful lot like A Dash of Humanity. Not to say that I didn't enjoying reading the first chapter, but it's not particularly original.
3454774 Huh? I was pretty sure i was doing my own thing here, can i get a link to that fic?
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I'm not surprised you did it by accident. Wouldn't be the first time an idea occurred to two different people.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/126741/dash-of-humanity
I like the direction of this story. Keep up the good work.
I might even like your story more than A Dash of Humanity
3454933 Thanks for the link! I promise i thought of this on my own though. Also, I'm creating an entire new species for my fic, that alone should give me some breathing room between the two.
Either add 'few' before 'moments' or change it to 'moment'.
Pretty nice thing ya got here. Was gonna read it last night, but I was beat. I can't wait for more. Oh, and it's on the Popular Stories list, by the way.
P.S. I'm here because of 3453903 saying something about it in his last update.
Forgot to comment when I read this but I like this and you need to get another chapter out soon.
Must havs unicorn that savors being drunk.
3456361 Onetrickpon3 is my friend and editor. Hes awesome! anyone who reads this comment should check out both him and his story Changin' Hooves!
P.s. Thanks for the heads up on that line!
// When Vynil meets Xila \\
"Hmm.... you have me quite interested."
// When Vynil wakes up \\
"Oh, definitely keeping an eye on this story now."
// When Octavia comes home to a sobbing Vynil \\
"Only the first chapter and already a favorite by me!!!
Oh, and from what I read, I saw no (more) grammar and spelling issues.
This was pretty good! Keep it up!
This looks like it will be pretty good. I've always found the concept of two minds having to share a body an interesting driving point for a story, whatever tone it may take. After all, the shenanigans practically write themselves, and I can't wait to read more of this tale. You're off to a strong start, so keep up the good work!
3458939 Thanks, means a lot!
This has me on the edge of my seat. I really hope that you will do more chapters.
I really enjoyed this.
ALOT!!!
3461185 Glad to hear it! Chapters will be coming out once a week, so stay tuned... if that's even possible for this sight...
Hm. It's a bit odd and there's not a lot of description to tell us of the characters surroundings, but it's quite funny. I shall be watching.
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Ha, ha!
Will do.
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I'm working on my story slowly (its not up yet) but I gotta' say, you really don't appreciate writing until you actually take up the challenge.
Its HARD!
3462347 Maybe, but I find it way more fun than hard. My friends could tell you about all my mistakes in the rough drafts, but my god is writing fun! And now I have a few followers, people are liking my story, it's all super gratifying, especially the idea that I could make someone I've never met smile or even laugh about something I did. Trust me, I've been doing this only a couple weeks but it is SO worth it!
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Well hopefully I can get my first chapter up soon (Its called The Soul Twin BTW)and then improve it from there. Hopefully it will bode well for my other books I am writing.
(I've only also been on for a week so I feel ya')
But it doesn't help when you're looking for a job and finishing up 12th grade.
Dramatic much, Vinyl?
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An interesting story, but your description needs work. I spotted a confusion of to/too in the second paragraph. Also, the second paragraph seems to imply that it's Vinyl who is near death.
*roll
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That's certainly an interesting idea. Onwards!
... Yes. Yes it did.
And you (3453903)! Chop chop!
Can't say I've read anything like this before.
Your tendency to tell what the character is going through instead of showing is a little distracting at times, but all in all I was thoroughly entertained. I look forward to more.
3462370 Dude, quit with the creepy similarities... I'm out of high school but still...
I applaud you good sir. This first chapter is very well written and plays this concept out well. Earned you a favorite and a curious man waiting for what is in store next.
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I Know this is weird, but true to Rainbow Dash style
AWSOME!
Sorry had to get that in.
Hey at least I know that I'm not the only one out there.
That's kinda' comforting.
To me anyway.
This is going to get interesting. Where did they get a bottle of Gargle Blaster though?
OneTrickPon3 told us about how you got him back into writing on fimfic
And also that you have a story in the works
Welp thanks for gettin OTP3 off their lazy butt
And the story is comeing along great
3478579 im a fan of vinyl and Octavia fics. So I used it since I've seen it in several of them.
3481639 I read Octavia and Vinyl fics to. They were probably referencing this Gargle Blaster.
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My butt is perfectly happy being lazy, although you are right. It was about time for the story to get an update or two... But more importantly, GO LYCAN!
Updates, a wonderful thing they are... A few missed commas, some minor errors here and there. I'll help you sort them out soon.
Also, blam.
Because Pinkie Pie.
3483568 ... Always a pleasure Merlos...
Get rid of the quotation. It is in the middle of the dialogue.
Should be italicized since it is a thought.
Need punctuation after 'glare'.
Sorry, habit. Good chapter.
3483765 I appreciate the help. I'll fix it ASAP. :)
If these are being set to go up every Wednesday, I finally have a reason to look forward to Wednesdays.
3485076 that's the plan, dude. I also have another fic idea I want to experiment with. Maybe after I have a few extra chapters of this backed up. ;)
Lycan, as a fellow first time writer, I can honestly say this was absolutely great.
You're probably feeling pretty nervouscited about it, but keep it going! 
I loved the 'One, and B' bit. Reminded me of "A, two, and D."
This may be because I've been watching a shit-ton of Stargate SG-1, but I keep imagining the Celestial's voice sounding like one of those Gou'ld symbiote voices