con do•lo•re ; sorrowfully (used as a direction in music)
"And how are we today, Miss Octavia?"
Her light purple eyes jerked up from the carpet they had been absorbed in to regard the unicorn that had posed the question. Her name, Octavia knew, was Pink Plasters. Her coat was a pale pink, with a cutie mark depicting two plasters crossed over each other to form an X. The white mane and tail complemented her coat perfectly, in Octavia's opinion.
"Fine," she muttered lightly, "perfectly fine." Octavia was always fine.
As fine as a pony stuck in Healing Hooves Psychiatric Hospital can be, anyway.
[Cover art by yiKOmega on deviantArt, used with permission]
Chapters (3)
Hmm... Interesting. Favoriting and Tracking.
So she's traumatized by Pinkie making her play the Pony Pokey? Hmm... strange, but still a good read. Also nice to see a different Octy then the common "uptight Vinyl Scratch obsessed" pony I see often. Speaking of, will Vinyl be in this fic?
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Yes, Vinyl will be in this fic, but Octy won't be "Vinyl Scratch obsessed", Octy's got her own problems to deal with at the moment.
Thanks so much for reading!
Exit Canterlot plays with this too, although your portrayal of Octavia's trauma after having had her once-hopeful career stomped on by Worst Pony is quite a bit more psychologically broken. Worth a track, though. Let's see where this goes.
Great story so far. Can't wait for next chapter. Why no Scratch emotioon
This is really excellent writing. However, this is categorized as romance? That's what I'm here to see actually. Sappy stuff.
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Don't worry, it'll get there. These things take time
LOVELOVELOVELO- oh, hey, new chapter. VINYLDFNASDFNJSDL: Anyhow, Great story, and hoping some more characters are delved into. Vinyl is an interesting case. I... can actually connect with the hurting yourself though, but for me its just biting.
Also, will this end up as a sweet, bitter-sweet, or bitter ending? Because I really can't tell. I have a bad feeling CT wants Octy to kill herself though.
Ooooo... I faved before reading so i wouldnt lose it, but wow, good read so far. but pinky was bound to send someone to the mental ward. :D
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Eh. Comet wants everybody to kill themselves. It's not just Octavia.
2685272 I can see him now, running through the halls screeching about how everyone is a waste of space.
Awesome work! I love this setting. It's something completely different. I hope there will be the next chapter soon
Hey guys! So, I'm looking for somebody to read over chapters for this story before I post them. I just need somebody to read over it and tell me if it sucks or not, if you're interested, please let me know!
Bitch deserved it.
Haha. I was waiting for this to get a new chapter! That was fun to read.
This rehabilitation center is a lot like modern American schools. Very fabricated. Very fucked up.
Vinyl is a bit dumb here.
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You do the pony pokey and you shack it all about... that's what it's all about...
I saw your avatar and had to do that
2783188 maybe not that stupid. in the previous chapter she mentioned that she hurt herself for various reasons so since she couldn't hurt herself there without others making a huge fuss over it she got somepony else to do it
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Octavia is best pony.
2787065 ehh... I prefer Derpy or Scratch, but Tavi is high on the list
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I love derpy and scratchy toooooo. 3 best ponies?
2789031 Yes, 3 best ponies. Dash in 4th, Pinkie in 5th, Celestia (trollestia) in 6th
Awesome. Vinyl must pay for her sins.
So, when does Comet Arse get busted for his part in the matter?
Poor Octavia, sure she hurt Vinyl, but Octavia get a really harsh punishment.
This is really good :o i want to read more! GIMME MORE!!
any news on possible updates?
Love it.
Gotta ask though, when do you plan on killing off Comet?