This story is a sequel to Arcane Shadow (extended)
Ten years is quite a long time to wait for some action in the form of delivering beat-downs. For this time, harmony has remained unaffected, unaltered, unchanged. It's just perfect. Humans, ponies, Gryphons and dragons...even the Changelings have found this harmony thanks to the efforts of the Mane Six and eight brave adventurers who stopped at nothing to right the wrong. To think the eight have settled down and had families after so long of battling wicked demons and demented gods of all things!
Those ten years have proven them quite worthy of the luxurious life of Equestria--with a few added obstacles throughout. What are those obstacles, you ask?
Children. Really needy children. And this is their tale, for all five share one story.
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The sequel of sorts to Arcane Shadow. It will be labeled everyone as my first attempt at an everyone-rated story. Criticism is advised and strongly cherished. Dark things are applied but is said in a way that doesn't evoke the teen rating shenanigans. '---' is used to indicate changes in time (i.e, flashbacks); '~~~~~' is used to indicate some time later/at another place later; and '=====' is used for change in perspective. Story remains third-person, however.
EDIT: Removed the Cheerilee tag because she doesn't play that big a role.
Me rikey.
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Fenrir's son and daughter would be threatening to bite someone's head off if they got bullies. My kids would not be scared of such petty names...but I understand and I love this story so far. Fen-Fen likes
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3229784>>3229733 Get this: I told mom about my plans for making this story a sequel to an adult-rated one and she told me to make this adult-rated as well. :/
I told her no.
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3229789really?
3229801 Really.
3229802of course
3229826 hence why I told her to take a hike.
Good job so far Florarena Keep it up!
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Oh crap
3243281 The foals or the bullies? XD
3243287the bullies can burn.I mean the foals, that's going to be bad after a while...and why do they all have to be so freaking picky I mean damn
3243351 It will come in time. (spoilers)
Yep that sucks
3253000 :3
3253040no A bunch of picky babies must be a pain in the ass.
3253906 yes, they are.
3253952give them a break dude, the mane six's kids need there own parents, or we teach them to not be picky.
3253964 ah
Yep...Fenrir is gonna be killing some bitches for messing with his family
3267754 sounds about right, but it will take place in between chapters.
3267772Yes, nobody messes with a Ki wolves family and gets away with it, especially when they killed some of there parents.
3267775 And then the kids get told something else altogether to keep their innocence intact.
3267778Yep. Lets hope that they wont hate us for lying when they heard it
3267792 Eeyup.
3267836yup
3267842 in other news, :3
3267847Katie is one sexy vixen X3
3267848 X3
need to draw a comic about those two. :3
3267853Please do I would love to see it
3267857 let me do something first. the comic will probably be in MS paint since i haven't had that much experience with Paint Tool SAI yet
3267867ok then
3267870 :3
3267874 0///0
3267879 XD
3267888 :)
3267891 I am thinking of making a were-beast Lance. After all, his mom is a fox. :3
BUT
there is a catch as always.
3267896like what?
3267905 kinda fox-like, but with more wolf-like features seeing as he is a male.
3267908well yeah that makes sense