This story is a sequel to Foxfire's Tail (extended)
Feh; you've all heard about vamponies, wereponies, Changelings, and the like. Am I correct?
I am those things combined with an alicorn. I lived in the shadows, feared as a creature of nightmares. Me and my kin have always lived like this.
Let me ask you this:
Have you ever stopped to think that even we creatures of the night--or I, for that matter--have nightmares of our own?
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My first one-shot AND slice-of-life, from Foxfire's perspective. Happens between Foxfire's Tail and Foxfire's Tail II: A Fleeting Dreamscape. Apparently, one-shots are getting popular. Maybe it's just me.
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That was a great story. I can some how relate.
3662019 I know
Well shit.
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Wow nice one shot here.
5292513 Yesh.
Great story, but a few things.
1: Use quotation marks to show that someone is talking.
2: indent your paragraphs.
3: Show any emotion a character may have when speaking like "Oh...my...Celestia. IT'S MY BIRTHDAY!!" Pinkie Pie squeals with joy, as she prances around her bedroom happily, knowing today is going to consist of a twenty four hour birthday party with everypony in Ponyville.
4: Keep writing, because I see great potential in you.
5: Try reading the most popular story from the what's hot list on the homepage. they might give you ideas how to construct your paragraphs , and what unique words you could use to describe a person, place or thing to make the story better.
5538774 Hence why I said to check my more recent works. This one-shot's over a year old.
5538813 kaykay
5538818 I'd recommend the re-write of Foxfire's Tail onward.
5538821 okay.
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5538830 I know. :3
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5538836 Let's not have emoticon wars. I have enough of those already. :D
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sad sad sad XD
5538843 D:
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5538901 X3
5538910 C=3
5538917 asdf
5538946 love it
5538949 fdsa
5538963 hey imma go to ved ok? its 2:27 am
5538980 Oki.
But it's overs that your hurting and I don't want to leave you alone or forget this experience you need help so I won't leave.
9719855 Of course, this was one of my... earlier works. Not particularly proud of how this one turned out.
But that's why I keep it up—so I can continue to learn from it.