It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.
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...What. MOAR?!
3028811 Yes. Stories take time, dude.
Liked, favorited, followed.
3028823
Hm. Seems to me that a few passages here are... suggestive.
3029690 Nevermind.
But that will be explained in next chapter
3029710 YOU ARE A HORRORABLE PONY! more?
3029982 I may be a horrible pony/person/whatevers, but I am merely explaining her backstory to those on iBrony who know her.
*shot 8584869 times*
And yes, I give more. Tomorrow. because of sleep
Please, tell me what happened. Flew by very fast.
3031164 PM me.
Quick question. Is it supposed to be tail as in the limb or tale as in story? Just saw that in the title and had to ask.
3034597 Both.
3034602
I see. I'm just saying that with it being spelled as the limb it could be a small confusion there.
3034698 American Tail reference
*shot*
3034701
Now I get it! That's a good reference to put in any story
~氷狐
3034711 yep. XD
"Passerby's" should be "passersby"
Taken in by Changelings?
3039338 Tried finding a plural.
Apparently I failed.
Hey, mistakes.
Ya learn from them, right?
3039347 Yep.
i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/004/128/BRILLIANT_.jpg
Seriously, I laughed so bloody hard at that!
3039365 Changelings have their ways.
...Unknown.
Merci.
I'm on this story like a fly to honey.
3039379
3031164
This.
3039387 Best response ever.
To one demanding immediate spoilers no less.
3039391
Actually, I was agreeing that it felt rushed and had poor pacing, but okay. If it makes you smile, I've done my job.
3039403 yep. ^^
3039404
:3
3039424 :D
I don't know why, but I bloody love this story! I cant tell what it is about it, but I do not tire of reading this.
3046044
Yes!
3046292
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
3046306 I got the advice to not overtag.
3046311
Correct. It is not a good idea to overtag.
3046316 Included the tag.
Whatever is this colt doing here?
3047716 Read previous chapter.
That will come in next chapter.
Just wait.
What the fuck? Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
3101061
... okayyyy... now i gonna give a big rage quit and never back good bye
3219254 say what?
3219255 i said good bye ¬¬ story cool but is not my style...
3219840 ah. ok
W-what? That intrigued me... quite a bit. The style is definitely a little odd to me. And it looks a bit daunting, what with the massive as heck paragraphs. But still, great start.
~SolidFire
Well then, this guy is quite the compilation of insulting words. We still don't know his name though... onward!
~SolidFire
Hmmm, just turned into a... alicorn of some sort. That would hurt like a bitch to break your wings like that. Can't wait to see how this moves on.
~SolidFire