It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.
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This is one of the best crossovers I've seen, I hope you continue with it.
3803049 I shall. And so will my collaborators
Good one. Hm. Is it a coincidence that Iv'e got the game a while ago, and now you upload this story?
3803114 I very recently found out about this and talked to my collaborators about it. They approved.
So here it is. How could I have missed out on something so great?
Good start, it stopped very abruptly though. Perhaps fleshed out a bit to make it a little longer? Anyway, I await the second chapter.
3803518 It's coming tomorrow. This is a collaboration after all.
You son of a slight f***, I am flubbergasled! Is that a word? NOW IT IS!
3804141 Rephrase please. I don't understand what you talk about.
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I love this and the game. I am completely out of my mind because of the existence of this story. Oh, and... MOAR!
3804157 Ah. Will do :D
I like this keep going. Also you managed to get my anger up so good job. I mean really good job you got me to release emotioms after reading this. Keep going you are doing a great job.
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Damnit,I would normally bitch about human turned pony,but honest with Isaac, it doesn't change much,.....though he DOES have a flying power up now.....habit,nine volt, and I'm pretty sure one other holy item plus the love heart are liable to be the only things he'd want,what with them giving effective immortality
3806235 WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOAA! SLOW DOWN!
3806238 Isaac is a fast paced game if your good at it,and personally I've got 99% of the game and the dlc done,forgive me for being a blur of luck when it comes to it
3806257 I know. But, as far as the collab is concerned, you're getting ahead of yourself.
Liked, almost faved. ^^
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3812799 Kisses kisses kisses!
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Ahehm* I'll give a sort-of well written review...
just give me a moment.
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Right, it's a prologue. No much to say about it, then. I mean...Well....
The only beef I have is that you could have had more developement. I think that would have been really excellent.
Maybe you could have had Isaac talk to Celestia for a while, and instead of him just accepting the invitation to an unknown world, by a freakish creature, big voice, and scary-as-shit stares, I'd say she would need to be more convincing.
So, she could have asked stuff like, does he love his mom, even though she killed him?
Does he regret his sins, or his mother's?
Etc etc. I'm just throwing it out there; as a prologue, it's GOOD. It gets the point across, moves things along, and shows the reader what is going to happen exactly. Hoooweveer...
I simply feel that there could have been more of a connection, since you are combining worlds, a stronger bond would have been nice. Like...For instance, Celestia is basically that connection, since she is the one that approached Isaac, thus you should make what creates that connection strong. What you gave us was short and sweet, but not fulfilling.
Now I'm just rambling...Hey! Next chapter soon, so I can REALLY go full-on critic mode? Tehe
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3812875 I can top that. Give me a minute.
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BAM!
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3812969 You've given me single faces for responses like...the past twenty replies.
3813076 :D
3813086 YOU'RE DISTRACTING ME
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Lawl. Awesomeness. This is a story that must be read! Can't wait to help out more!
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A huge collab with Roarin Thunder, herowertyer, RedStar76, and electrexessive. You guys are awesome :D
I feel so special!! I'm the second!! *hug* *cries of happyness*
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Why is all you put only one word or thing (and on other things)????
3819641 idk
3806235 calm yo ta ta boy. Send me s private message and I will see what I can do about editing some stuff due to the fact it is the first chapter still.
3812857 Isaac himself never really spoke even when his mother was gonna kill him so talking a lot may be a meh~ but I see what you mean in all the other parts.... So maybe we can revise the whole chapter. Meh. Send me feedback if you must~
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I am excited for the future chapters though!
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Hey, y'know....
Might be abrupt, but-
I can...
Help out.
3822632 you can contact me on skype and I can fit you in the group, if you want. I'm herowertyer on everything (except live streams and Facebook)
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This is great. Can't wait for more. Isaac is one of the best games I've ever played and I'm really glad there's a crossover here. This should be interesting...
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Do you mean the first ending to Binding of Isaac? (the one with the bible) Or one of the other ones?
4125067 Spoilers for all endings, particularly the bible one.