Braeburn was in love.
Problem was, he weren't sure if said love would return his affection, and so he did confront said love about it.
Ol' Macintosh broke Braeburn's little heart, and the little cowpoke was just about ready to give up and consign himself to a life of bitterness, disappointment and unhappiness.
But when an opportunity shows herself, Braeburn decides to take a plunge, hoping that Macintosh would change his mind at last.
If only he knew what powers he did deal with...
Rated Teen for now, debating necessity of clop. Therefore no warnings section... For now.
But here. Have some BraeMac and silly gay romance stuff. Because I wanted to show up Guy_Incognito do it for the goodness of wanting to do it.
Thank you, and enjoy.
Edited by members of the glorious Story Cabel.
Kinda featured (you have to turn Mature off to see it in the box) 9/18/2013
If you downvote before reading you're an immature, homophobic prick.
Hmm.
This... Hmm.
Not bad. But... I normally don't deal with M/M ships...
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Good so far! Looking forward to the next chapter
Congratulations, Badger. You done good with this thus far.
Oh my GAWD this must continue.
You know, I've never previously seen an M/M romance on this site that wasn't rated Mature. I kind of hope it stays Teen, just for variety's sake.
Show up Guy_Incognito? Godpseed, Badgerpony, Godspeed. And if you are indeed successful, may Celestia have mercy on us all.
I think Brae is now a mare.
But he's not comfortable with himself, either... that's probably the real problem.
Onwards to more!
Oh man... this is getting good.
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It's not gay if magic makes you a mare. Or something.
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True enough.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Here here! Someone's gotta put that Incognito guy in his place! He's been makin' trouble all over town and struttin' around like he owns the place...
There is absolutely no way this can end well.
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And yet I still can't wait for the next chapter
3278789 derp
Brae is in trouble now...
Also, interesting how nopony cared that Brae was in love with his/her cousin. Not that it matters, but it kinda surprised me.
I don't understand why Braeburn is so surprised the amulet turned him into a mare, and it took Sweetie Belle to make him realize that as a mare, he might have a chance with Big Mac. For example, in chapter two, you wrote:
This passage seems to imply that Braeburn goes along with Done Deal because he wants to turn into a mare in order to win over Big Mac.
Anyway, having the CMC try to set Brae up with Big Mac is bound to produce some interesting results. I look forward to seeing the next chapters.
I like this. Now if you keep Braeburn a mare you got yourself a customer. You add in a happy ending for her, we'll get these clothes off and see where that takes us.
Other than the fact that this is a good story, I have nothing encouraging to say so I shall bite my tounge and shut up now. Good luck *hhhnng so tempting, yet so rude* >///< sorry for bothering... ignore me.
Hey.
Where's some more of this?
So if I were to ask if you had another chapter of this in the works, your answer would be..?
I apologize if I can't come up with anything more coherent or intelligent to add, just - Braeburn, you IDIOT.
My opinion of Braeburn's intelligence continues to drop with each chapter, and yet I still want to read more. He's accepting help from the
Matchmakers. Oh lord will this end in flames.