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I will follow you all :pinkiecrazy:


Collab by: Lilith911 and Vic Viper
Right before Nightmare Moon's defeat, she made a prophecy, one predicting the end of the world at the hands of somepony close to Celestia herself. When the pony comes to be, and Celestia falls in love with the newest princess, she tries to forget the dark prophecy and live a happy life, but as time goes on, she begins to fear for the sake of the kingdom. Will this inner struggle drive her to madness, and what will she do to the pony she believes is from the prophecy, her daughter?
Cover art by: ArtemisX31

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 74 )

I'm already halfway through and i'm loving it! :pinkiecrazy:...I think.

Well, somepony wrote herself a story, didn't she? I'll give it a read.


Oh gawd

with all of those followers and all those you follow this story is like insta-popular

3144855 Oh no! She found me! Run! :raritydespair:

6 views, 6 likes, 6 comments.... That's a good set of numbers :rainbowkiss:

Well... When I put the comment it was... :rainbowkiss::pinkiecrazy::rainbowwild::raritystarry::pinkiecrazy:

I will be watching this, I want to get to the gore.:pinkiecrazy: Anyway, i'll leave you a little upvote.

Well well. This should be fun, indeed.

~Skeeter The Lurker

ooooh, this is interesting. *sits and grabs popcorn* Keep it up Lilith!

This story is fantastylicious, my dear.
I'm so proud of you:rainbowkiss:

It's gonna be her, isn't it? She's gonna be driven by all these doubts and fears. Even if you are close to someone, you are always closer to yourself. (Well, almost always; but you see what I'm getting at.)

Yes, I made it obvious enough that I feel I can say fo a fact that it is... Or I could just be messing with you :pinkiecrazy:

Eh, you're too sexy for me to care. :raritywink:

Nice Dental!

yay my cover art is up :pinkiehappy::yay:

im not a big fan of thes kinda storys but this is good

What do you mean by, 'these kinds'?
This is going to be really sweet... For a while :pinkiecrazy:

3147122 i mean i dont normaly read gore fics as long as scootaloo dont die ill read it :scootangel:

Not too bad, but this story desperately needs some editing... :unsuresweetie:

Want me to help? :trollestia:

Yea, she won't die... At least if she does you won't see it or hear of it...:pinkiecrazy:

3147365 at lest i wont have to read it if she does lol

The world's gonna burn... And we can't focus on everything... :pinkiecrazy:

I personally don't like Twi/Celi romance stories but I do love the name Astra Sparkle. Anywho I'll give the story a follow and see what you an Vic have in store. I'm sure it will be interesting to say the least.

On a different note I like that eye thing you did for following. Pretty cool. Have some Pinkie love just for you. :pinkiesad2::pinkiecrazy: Oh, and Vic to. :heart:

Just want to point out that you forgot to capitalize the "W" in the word "When" in the description.

Don't wanna be a grammar nazi, just helping out.

It isn't a twi/cel romance... There is a little in it... But we will be focussing on the insanity growing in Celestia's head
And when you say the eye thing, do you mean the eye made of pinkamenas?

It's not insane enough.

Just wait... That's only the prologue :pinkiecrazy:


Five embarrassing posts about yourself says you can't.

On a scale of 1 - 10 this is a 2 if you can reach a 6 you win.

You have until you reach 25,000 words or the end of the story to change that from a 2 to a 6 a 6 is rainbow factory, cupcakes is a 10.

Ah, but I will be building it up, it will not be a straight up gorefic... It's going to be really sweet for the first bit... Then it all goes to hell :pinkiecrazy:

3152576 Yeah, the Pinkie eye thing. I thought it was pretty cool.

The romance tag was there so I just figured there would be more of it. It didn't really matter anyway. I don't like the pairing but it wouldn't stop me from reading a story that had it. :twilightsmile:


That's my dark scale.

If you want ill gauge it by tragedy and sad.

5 for tragedy which is fairly easy with insanity

5 for sad which is have only ever awarded one story before

And for the other genres 4 (romance is your freebie.)

Your current start


Hmm, then this is a challenge we will aim to beat :pinkiecrazy:

3152964 how come you have a pinkie crazie emote in all of your comments except 1? :rainbowderp:

Hmm, well actually, I'm planing on building up Astra so that everyone wubs her... Then it all goes to hell :pinkiecrazy:

This story needs to be in more groups... allow me to assist...

That is all. Equestria is ours.


I just went on a group 'spree' i added it to a full 10 of the groups I'm in... :pinkiesad2:
Help is appreciated :pinkiecrazy:

Too bad ponies do not have ultra painful labor when giving birth, since it's reserved for humans...(because of the position of our pelvis)

Meh, I'm me, and if you don't know me yet, then let me formally introduce you to hoping to be site stalker soon, myself.
Also known as the one who hunts for all of your souls and flesh for consumption at a later date in the form of a sugary treat :pinkiecrazy:

How did they have a kid? I'm so confused...

Hmm, we were debating whether to have a flashback chapter that explains it... Or just say magic :pinkiecrazy:

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