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Canterlot is under attack by changelings, all hope is lost when the changelings manage to storm the castle and reach the throne room. A lone unicorn stands and fights against the oncoming horde of enemies. Will he survive? Will he protect all that he loves? Will I stop asking questions? Or is this all just the beginning of something bigger?
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3242087 ...I do have a plot for this...Just want to see how well it is received before finalizing it. I am very happy you liked it
Yay! Awesome! All I have to say is spell out any numbers. Seven, three, ect. There were a few just in number form.
3242189 Thanks! I'll fix those up as soon as I can
It needs some editing but other than that. The fight scene was incredibly made and I wasn't expecting that ending. Very excited to see where this goes.
Also, I think you should change some of the verbs to past tense. I think they will make more sense and be much easier to read.
I agree with previous comments. The imagery was detailed and the fights were well choreographed, but it can use some heavy editing. I saw several instances of misplaced capitalization, run on sentences, etc. Keep it up though, because this looks pretty interesting.
3245191 3245306 Thank you both! I am happy you enjoyed it
When I get the chance, I will fix those. I get home late today...