• Published 1st Jul 2013
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Lonesome - Lord Despair



How will this human survive? How will he cope with the sudden change? Can he live in a world of peace without screwing it up?

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Comments ( 19 )

Well this was unexpected

Finally an update! I hope the next chapter will not take too long.

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I hope so too. And that the next one is not so rough to get out

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Unexpected? Good or the bad kind?

Is this just a retelling of Friendship is Magic, just with a human added into the main cast?

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No, If I recall right this takes place sometime after season 2ish, maybe 3 but that's far it has ever gotten. Although I could be misremembering.

Been looking forward to an update for a long time. Hope to see more in the future!

Tho not quite sure about Pinkie Pie being a stallion.

Well interesting to see this get updated, been quite a while since I read it but finally enough I was actually considering rereading it recently

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Pinkie pie, well she and I had an odd relationship. She has always been the most difficult to write for, at least for me. In every fic I used her in, she always turns out more what's the term I'm looking for, a deeper character? No, that's not it, simply put she always has another life of sorts. This time she's a he, a feminine-looking stallion, last time she had a history with demons, and protecting her friends from the world unseen, and the time before that she was supposed to be the final big bad (that fic never got written.) funny bit is she also happens to be the one member of the mane 6 I worked with the most.

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I wasn't expecting it, either. The chapter had been sitting for a good while but well I thought it was time to shoot and hopefully return to writing ponies.

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The return of the king

Well, that exulted fucking quickly. Wonder where we shall go from here, can’t wait to see it!

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poor guy and poor twilight too but then again sombras effecting his mind i hope things turn out ok

I liked this story a lot but wean it came to certain chapter's made me drop it so fast now this is 1 of my most disliked story's ty 4 ruining a story not cool

Well, this certainly turned in to trash quickly.

The amount of military weapons that the guy has is ridiculous, it's as if he had assaulted a military unit alone, the cliché of a human being who is good at fighting everything is pure bullshit, only a common bear is difficult to kill whether you have one or not. weapon at hand without you getting hurt or dead and this guy kills 4 brutes with a kick included, it's stupid, the human being in a hand-to-hand fight with any animal of his size his chances of survival are always against him more than 50%

Es ridículo la cantidad de armamento militar que tiene el tipo, es como si hubiese asaltado una unidad militar el solo, el cliché de ser humano que es bueno luchando contra todo es mierda pura, solo un oso común es dificil de matar tengas o no un arma a mano sin que salgas herido o muerto y este tipo mata 4 brutos con patada incluida, es estupido, el ser humano en una lucha cuerpo a cuerpo con cualquier animal de su tamaño sus posibilidades de supervivencia siempre son en contra suya mas del 50%

Hell yeah bro this story is getting really good keep it up

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