A chupacabra, that's new. I'm liking this story so far. Keep it up!

Last Of Us type of story?

"Fucking pice of shit!"

its supposed to be piece but if pice is a word I don't care this story is awesome

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Mind telling me which part of the chapter has the mistake so I can fix it?

it will forever haunt me that my name has been mentioned in this story

Lol the chupacabra!

hmmm the Chupacabras intresting my grandfather said he once saw one and it resembled more that of an Orangutan onto the next chapter

Ha i knew it who sad studding Cryptozoology was a waste of time

Is it really a chupacabra, or does it just look like one?

glad to see the quality picked up since the first chapter, there are grammar issues, the sentence structure being a bit off and that really killed the pace of the first chapter, it may one day be worth getting someone to look at the story to get it all in order as the first impression is important and a poor quality first chapter can put people off getting into a story.

Gasp, El Chupacabra! Need to get Sombrero to help.

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al diablo con esas chingaderas
pinches chupacabras, a la mierda con esas madres

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I found some Mexican music to set the mood

Orally güry el pinche chupacabra bro.

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HE WILL NOT HELP SENOR! HE JUST KEEPS SHAKING HIS MARACAS!

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