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That was fucking awesome xD
You can't tell me what to do!
Well, Isaiah just kicked some major ass. I hope Shinning isn't angry with him or anything. Ah well, now we have Queen Chrysalis to look forward to!
Also, maybe Isaiah and his stuff just had to become "saturated" with magic before they could easily be manipulated with magic. Like electrical wire and electronics have to get saturated with a varying amount of energy before the electrons can pass through.
Now that was a fun chapter.
Fucked up, but fun.
Yaaay! Another new chapter to a story in a favs! Can't wait to see the next part of this story and who this mysterious stranger might be.
Yeah Queen Chrysalis! Whoop whoop!
Like the mystical being wasn't Chrysalis at all.
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LOVE TRIANGLE! chrysalis vs luna! BEGIN!
Go Ghost Recon in those mutts! And great chapter. I like the guerrilla ambush tactics
Why did you even need to warn us about the gore tag? It was used plenty before in earlier chapters.
great chapter
i'd ship it. isia-lis for the win
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Fixed! Thanks for pointing that out.
3770752 you're welcome
We are not Alpha Predators for nothing as those dogs found out. Also, I really hope we see Chryssy again in Season 4.
Go Chrysalis!!
3774539 Hell yeah! Top of the foodchain
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I was totally gonna post the same comment so here it is Go Chryssie.
So it is showing you updated, but no chapter is able to be read without a password
Yeah, had it say there was a story update too but not seeing a new chapter
I don't like it when someone makes this mistake. You still got it partly right, but it just bugs me.
Suppressors do nothing without sub-sonic/cold rounds loaded in the chamber. Well, not true, they do act as a flash hider and ever-so-slightly increase accuracy. But that's not the point, the point is you wrote it the closest to real life that I've seen.
I didn't know there was a fourth
Hmm, hello there Chrysalis. Nice to see you be nice for once.
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OMJ posted a blog update about that, it was a mistake. S/He published it when it was only half done.
3769130 That is what should have happened, man I wish he should have shown no mercy to those Diamond Dogs.
Luna is a stupid bitch. In her jealously, she nearly killed everybody.
Woohooo! Chrissy isn't a bitch! I like that.
Ya Chrisy! I find it more enjoyable when she actually works with the main protagonist, even though she might still hate the sisters
For the first time ever I red a fix that doesn't involve chrysalis being bitch...
I'm happy
He's about to go kill some dogs, not play airsoft.
Yay dear chrysy is here.
More slight spelling errors.
herd*
In chapter 13...
Is not "Mysterious"?
Nice story, but another misplaced word in your story is using 'revile' in place of 'reveal' Seen it in this chapter and one or two prior chapters.
He's making quite the reputation for himself. Aligning himself with Equestria, and now the Changelings. The downside is that he's the Boogieman to the Diamond Dogs and I'm certain they'll want revenge. I'm curious if he is also highly resistant to the love-drain since that too is Equestrian magic?
5368957 different species, different kind of magic is my guess.
5368957 now that would be funny. "we can feed from him but it takes more love to do so than we would gain!"
The moment I saw that title I tried so hard to laugh...I failed.
If the hostages weren't scarred for live before, they sure as hell are now ; thanks to the protagonist.
It's chrysalis
To quote a certain princess;
"Absolute Violence that no human can withstand, the power to crush anything...A power that denies Pride, Honor, and everything else...Is the Goddess mocking us?"