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Blows that school is gonna delay your updating, but at least you have your next chapters thought out so no worries
hes gonna get caught.
shogun blast to the balls man I would be begging to kill me after that
Didn't check the bodies? Tsk tsk tsk. That's gonna come back to bite you in the ass Isaiah.
Seems needlessly sadistic to kill the Diamond Dogs who were just minding their own business.
Also, not sure if I like the direction this is going with Chrysalis. I see where you are coming from with it, but it is odd how he is so devotedly helpful to her for no apparent reason. How can his character be a badass who doesn't give a fuck, and plays hard to get with the princesses, and then just suddenly becomes the most generous nice guy on the planet when he meets Chrysalis, who has never been especially nice in return I might add.
his home is going to have that naughty Luna smell because what else would she do there when all she wanted was a booty call and got rejected
I keep reading Isaiah's lines as Commander Shepard's voice.
*Groan* Always ALWAYS check to see if they're all dead.
This will bite him in the arse so hard later I can already feel it.
My only real beef with this fic ,at all really, is Isaiah's character development. I get that he's from a Apocalyptic zombie world and all that but his... sheer joy at watching those Diamond dogs literally blow themselves up felt, wrong. Almost disturbingly so. Now, if this is what you're going for then bravo.
I get that the Diamond Dogs and him don't share the best of relationships. It's just that there's something off putting about his ability to be this cold heartless killer and then gentle lover later. I guess what I'm trying to say is it feels like there is to large of a shift in his character at times.
Granted I haven't had enough time to fully digest what I've read and I'll probably think abit differently on his approach to all this later.
Aside from these concerns, Great chapter.
4888006 I think he might feel a conection to Chrysalis because he found her when she had a hard time in her life. Alot like how every day was for him in his own world and now that he's in this new "friendly" world he wants to give something back to those who don't have it easy
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4890445 Thanks for pointing that out, I went back and fixed it!
4890445 No! I'm not dead yet!
Please don't tell me this will turn out like "your human and you" where everyone one wants to fuck da human.
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Fixed.
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"He tapped on his rifle with anticipation as he waited for the Diamond Dogs to show up for the grand finally; their present waiting for them under a large, flat piece of stone."
I knew it was a grenade, otoo easy of a guess.
Why so much hate for Diamond Dogs...?
A basic rule of such affairs, kill those who do the work....whether or not he actually gets away with it or not depends on if one of them actually survived.
Kabooooom
como no vive en el pueblo no puede tener mucha interacción con otros ponis
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I read your comment as the voice in cod zombies when (us player's) pick up the nuke
drop