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Thumbs up: if you think that Isaiah should sabotage the supplies going to the east
Thumbs down: if you thing that Isaiah should leave it alone
4827509 Thumb up the shit outta that thing...
One thing that always bugged me was how the ponies explicitly believe that Changlings are nothing but evil. Granted they did invade their capital, but out of desperation and necessity, rather than usurpation and greed. Kudos to you for shining a different light on them.
Also, Isaish is turning into a pimp... Just saying
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pimpus isaiahcus
4827509 please dont let him do it with cadence...this really doesnt sit well with me. iv liked other stories where the same idea happened..but for this one just gives me a sore feeling..
1: If Cadance gets upset just from mentioning changelings, she is going to be PISSED when she finds the Queen being nursed by our human
2: I say Cadance's gets stood up by Isaiah, and he breaks Shining's teeth for cheating on their deal
If he is going to do it with Candance then I would like her to break up with Shining beforehand.
Isaiah going with Cadance when she's married with Shining reeeeeeeally doesn't sit well with me.
Keep some of the morals he has from his own homeworld with him.
What they are doing is close to genocide.
If cadence breaks up with shining I want to see the biggest shitstorm that I will ever see when the ponies find out about him helping out Chrysalis
Here's what I think should happen:
Isaiah goes to Chrysalis and warns her of the Death Squad heading her way. He devises a plan to fool Shining by using discarded chitins to make The Queen and her last children appear dead (Statue of Liberty Play) then leaves Cadence hanging, forcing her to seek out Shining & hump him into oblivion. Meanwhile, Isaiah moves the Changelings while Shining is distracted to a new location further away from Ponyville but slightly closer to his shelter.
4827509 Not only do I think he should sabotage the supplies, he should also give Chrysalis a warning about what Shining told him
Click link page and you will see rainbow dash and scoot (or page not found) XD.
It mean your link have error can you fix XD
Posting just a couple little spelling errors that I noticed.
E: "My co-workers don’t arrive until much later, therefore leaving me alone with some free time every morning when there’s no patience to care for.”
C: patients*
E: "The alicron of love answered."
C: alicorn*
Maybe Shining loser can... Die. Please.
wellp thats a toughy. if he helps chrysalis the ponies will be super pissed at him, you cannot write your way outta that. if he helps the ponies chrysalis hive will die out. so its a lose lose scenario for our wasteland survivor. gonna have to pick one of two evils and live with it. please dont pick the first one and resolve the conflict quickly, its amazingly boring when authors decide that conflict resolution can happen in the span of minutes opposed to the reality of weeks and months.
I effing love Queen Chrysalis. Write that he helps her. Sure Celestia and all them will be pissed. You can write out of that though with a couple chapters covering. Isaiah explaining why he is helping her. Luna and Cadence might need some time but Celestia isn't stupid and she is very understanding. So make it a happy ending for everybody. Actually kill or imprison Shining Armor and put Cadence in Isaiahs harem. Basically have Isaiah fuck Cadences brains out.
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It might have to do with Shining threatening to take away Isaiah's pay away. Last time I checked - despite the payment- Isaiah was doing the ponies a solid, so they wouldn't get pointlessly killed in fights with those chupacabra things.
Also. . . It's a little weird to have a husband THAT desperate to get you fuck his wife.
Hell, I feel silly just witting that sentence.
I'm sorry but having Shining Armor extorting him does not feel right at all. I could understand him asking if she goes really crazy and he doesn't want a child yet (assuming estrus is the same thing it means here) but a guard performing a crime to get someone who's in good with both of the major princesses of the diarchy is stupid. All he has to do is tell them either the truth and shining is arrested or he tells them he won't be killing anymore chupacabras and any more dead guards are on Shining's head as he said he would refuse to pay the bounty unless he did something he didn't want to do.
Well look, sure they were starving, but if you go with show canon,
4827590 she was acting super villainy, I mean bragging about the wedding and brainwashing him and shit, not exactly nice.
Oh wow.... betting on a Coin to whether He would have sex with Cadence or not... Hilarious
Cheating armor strikes again
I'm 50-50 on Isaiah x Cadence, but I'm all for Isaiah x changeling.
4833256 Prepare your anus, Luna fans are coming :0
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This plan is very stronk, I like.
Move all your shit into chrsysalis's gave and bunk out!
"God Save The Changeling Queen"
If I was Isaiah my answer to Shining for killing the Changelings and cheating on the coin flip, would be him picking his teeth off the ground with a pair of broken hooves.
4833595 Hey the link is 404... just wanted ya to know. Excellent story BTW.
I see what you did there, he'd sleep on the subject.
Shining armor confirmed for being a cunt. Yes, I said cunt.
To start off: Shining is a dick. I think we can all agree on that, right? Seriously, though, ugh... *shivers*
On a more serious and constructive note, I like the fact that changelings are in fact, completely misunderstood by the ponies, and that Celestia and Luna actually admit to not understanding them. Nice to see not everyone is a judgmental asshat, even though it is kind of to be expected from the rulers of a country (*cough cough* Cadence *cough cough*).
4830064 What if she was doing just that: acting? She was acting on a truly desperate move that required her to be absolutely ruthless and calculating. If she'd shown mercy or weakness, I'm pretty sure not everything would have ended the way it did. And not in a better way. Also, there is the fact that getting that much power can make anyone go a little, to borrow a phrase from James Vega, borracho.
Looking forward to seeing how Isaiah resolves the situation with Chrissy. It would be nice if he can prevent total extermination of a species, hmm?
Keep up the good work,
- Bloody Buddy
This guy does however seem a little all over the place in terms of dealing with others, he might get more consistent over time though.
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Might've been smarter of her to have split the chapter into two parts, but such hindsight is all it is, and wont help her now.
asta ahora se da cuenta de lo sexualmente abiertos que son los ponis