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That needs to be something else. Perhaps "proposal"? Preposition is a way to describe a place. I.e. Under the Bridge, Over the bridge
Lovely chapter, as per the norm. It's nice to see the chapters like this in stories where character intimacy is progressed without deviant acts, but rather through actions like you would witness a couple doing in public. Warm fuzzies all around! Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work
I feel like the quality of the chapters has gone down a bit...
The princesses having a sister-sister-niece incest; Cadance and Shining having an open relationship, hermaphrodite spell WTF!? No offense but this is getting weirder by the minute...
Think I can submit 2 characters to act as 'guards'? These 'guards' are actually spotters for two different special forces groups that are interested in recruiting Isaiah
Filling Cadence perhaps :D. All the alicorns belong to him now!
Make Isaiah something akin to a private military contractor.
His freedom is what makes this story unique. Don't hook him up with the royal gaurds, considering that they don't even have the same morals.
Ok now this proves that this story is just a block away from the banana store.
I should really stop myself now but what the heck.
Do a gender-swap chapter.
4648431 I'm going to assume that it was supposed to be "proposition" instead of preposition. Considering it's a single letter off, it would make more sense than proposal. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As for my full opinion on the chapter: Absolutely beautiful. Minor issues with grammar and whatnot, but other than that? Amazing. Can't wait to see more!
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Personally I think the quality is fine.
Also... when you add magic into sex of course you get all sorts of weird and freaky shit!
This sounds like a "You're Human And You" ad.
I hope Isaiah don't give the ponies guns.
Human is superior in bed trembel in fear puny stallions.
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"you are human and you" ad? are you sure you don't mean "your human and you"
4691977 Probably.
Thid has been a lovely story, but is in desperate need of editing. There is an editor group you should take full advantage of, I'd offer my services but allas business keeps one busy. Good luck sir, I'll eagerly await the next update.
4648752 lucky, my good sir, this is the internet, and here we've seen worse.
4713088 I don't know why, but I found your line of comments really funny.
It's like. "Oh god, I hope this doesn't happen. Shit it's going there...FUCK"
Just wait till you get to the latter chapters...
How will Isaiah take it when Cadance wants to have sex with him? Is he going to try and win Cadance all for himself? He really doesn't like the part about open relationships (Who does?). Even thinking about another human/stallion taking one of your loved ones brings you to madness.
Can't wait on how you will tackle this problem.
“I swear by the moon, I didn’t touch her.”
By far my favorite line in this chapter.
Irolled off my chair.
Haha, tremble in fear puny stallions! For the human is here! The mighty warrior of sexytimes!
I want to see flash backs to those hot sexy bits hinted at... Heck, I now wonder who took each of their virginities o.O Who started each of the hot sexy sex bits? xD
Is this Slaanesh's version of Equestria?
I assume they meant enjoying together? I mean, considering what they describe later, it's hard to believe they're virgins...
I think " It should be starting in a couple of minutes, come and follow us"
Would fit more