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Fuck me, I need to go to bed; I have a ton of shit to do...
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choo choo
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I like trains, so thumbs up.
With the ending of last chapter, I was expecting clop but I'm pleasantly surprised that there isn't.
Good chapter, can't wait for more.
Wooo update days are so nice. :D
Couple of things really stood out for me this chapter.
First is how he stated that it would have been selfish of him to deny Cadence during her cycle. That just feels abit odd considering she sorta guilt tripped him into going against his cultural taboos cause she needs the D. Now granted he may not be all that against it but I didn't get the feeling he wasn't. It felt more along the lines of pity(kinda).
Second is how Chrysalis reacts to his question about sleeping with the Princesses.
The first slap I understand. The shock of having such values questioned would come across as very shocking, especially considering the old school vibe I keep getting from Chrysalis. And as such the first slap was understandable regardless of his ignorance. Holding off on the second was a nice call but spitting on his face I felt crossed the line. If I was Isaiah I would have gotten up and left right then and there. Gone back to check up on her yes but I wouldn't be as friendly for some time towards her.
Because?
If anything Chrysalis is just a guilty for the question as Isaiah. She never explained how Changeling society worked let alone their Queens. His ignorance of such a touchy subject is more her fault. Unless I've already forgotten about such a thing.
Now don't take my view of Chrysalis' actions as disliking her character. If anything I enjoy it quite abit. She feels much more royal than the Princesses but not a whining bitchy bitch always going on about how she's a Changeling Queen and should be treated as such (seen in one to many HiExChrysalis fics). Its just that she keeps calling him "Her one and only friend" but treats him like a peon.
One last thing is Isaiah's character itself. Going from having your face spat on to looking forward to hanging out with that individual the next day feels weird.
4994560 Tortles?!?! I must know what these Tortles apparatuses are before I can rightfully place my vote in the respected spot reflecting my true opinion.
im finding the main character to be developing far too many characteristics and personality traits that benefit the royalty of both species far to quickly. hes kinda becoming very boring as he continues to fill every possible niche he would need to make 4 different personalities happy and content. i guess im saying, plot good, main character becoming boring.
The part with Chrissy made sad. I'd hate for their friendship to end in such a mannor. I do believe her spitting on him was a bit much( I would of walked away emitley and never came back), but we all do things we regret when where angry. I do hope to see there relationship grow into something more.
I can only assume that university ( like most of us) has kicked you in the nuts and brought ya back into the fold. And if such is true no one will mind ya taking your time.
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4994560 i liek trians :3
(Purposely misspelled that)
Oh my god I know that feels.
Math Studies year 11 is full of that quadratic shit. It's so bad
No*
Great chapter :)
5160459 Yeah, sorry about the poor writing. My writing skills aren't very appealing in the first chapters but I promise you that it improves over time.
Goodbye my only friend.
... oh, did you think I meant you?
That would be funny, if it weren't so sad.
Well you have been replaced!
I don't need anyone now!
When I delete you maybe
[REDACTED]!
5244170 really a portal 2 reference
I think most of the town hates him because they saw what he did to rainbow dash
No idea what happened after chapter 29 maybe it was the long break between chapters 29-30, but everything started to go to shit with this story over the past few chapters. I'll sum up the these chapters so you don't waste your time reading 30k words of garbage that takes Isaiah's character and forgets that chapters 1-29 happened for the stake of some fucked up clop. Surprise! He fucks Celestia and then Luna and was drugged and raped by Cadence (can't forget about those shock collars) but no one seems to care(not even Isaiah) also started a herd with Luna and Celestia. Chrysalis sends a drone to steal a book from the shelter, drone breaks lock on the door. Twilight then goes to the shelter with applejack and steals a book, applejack bumps the workbench on the way out.
If only he had the movie Apollo 13.
If you don't know what that movie is I feel sorry for you it's a really good movie.