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Holy friggen hell. Best New Years Eve present ever!
I was getting worried that this was not going to update again, especially after the events in the previous chapter
Spelling needs a little work, there are a few missing things like "part" should be "party" in reference to Pinkie. Just little bits like that usually just a missing letter or have an extra letter.
Keep up the awesome work on this, hope to see another chapter soon.
#bestfanficsneverupdate
Wooot update xD
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Love how you described Rainbow's mane
Barely
Isaiah, thinking of murdering Tia with a meat cleaver is not a very clever idea
Refrain
One too many E's
"...they were nowhere near..."
Or
"...they were in no way near..."
If this is pre Wedding, then Luna would use the "Royal We." If this is post Wedding, then the correct grammar would be "I'm very sorry, Twilight, But Isaiah and I have work to do."
I like this story, but there are quite a few spelling errors, grammar and punctuation mistakes, and just plain weird wording. I'm not going to stop reading, oh no, and I will keep this favorited, but you need a(n) better/editor.
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Thanks for pointing out my mistakes, I went back and fixed them. I tend to not think clearly at 3:00 in the morning when I'm writing.
3710955 I try to avoid that. Not like it works, because of awesome stories.
I'm surprised he didn't meet a certain royal prick while in the castle?
As much as I hate pony x human I will finish this story
TROLLESTIA!!!!!
Grammar must be fixed!!!!!!!
Them funny innuendos.
"She looked down at my boxers and back at me and winked"
NO! NO! not like that! bad mind!
Magical hands this one has.
I have a feeling that the author had some inspiration from loony toons