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"...seven million...."
I do hope you meant million with a B. As it is hard to kill billions of people, when there are only a few million.
Yay harem fic. Hopefully.
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Oh shit, I'll go fix that!
nice story so far. I especially like where it's going so far.
That son of a bitch found my laptop
3045925 Ha, thats all i got to say to that.
Another well done chapter!
*Gasp!* The dreaded estrus cycle returns!
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Also I think you might've meant to spell "herd" and not "heard" in that last part of the chapter.
well dude you going to get tenderly loved
ooooooh boy. ALL ABOARD THE RAPE TRAIN!
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MOAR!!!!
Next stop rapeville
You have no idea, you poor, poor, diluted fool. Your only chance is to hide, run, or submit... I recommend one of the first two... the third is only for if your cornered. And I pray for your soul that Molestia doesn't find you. Build a spaceship and fast, but be cautious, for not even being on the mon can save you now.
well shit.
INB4, raep shitstorm
I want to come inside Rainbow Dash.
>rape
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well his fucked and screwed, may God/Celestia have mercy on his soul
> rape
> implying he doesn't want horse pussy
> mfw
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That's exactly what they'll do you fool!
4520333 um that would be pony pussy
The rapetrain will soon be boarding
Please all passangers remember to put a "Do Not Disturb" sign on your door when engaging sexual depravity
Also please remember this one thing:
NO GETTING OFF THE RAPETRAIN!!!
4561055 And for anyone who thinks that they can stop it....
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4561055 And for anyone who thinks that they can stop it....
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I have noticed that the further along you go in the tory, the better the structure and wording of your sentences become. I am glad that you are not one of those authors who does not improve, and, while you are still some distance from being where I hope you'll end up, you have till kept a great plot to keep me hooked.
If you want some advice, I've found that it is good practice to read what you have written out loud, be it dialogue or narrative, and think about how it sounds. If it does not seem like someone would actually say that then rewrite the sentence or paragraph (and I don't mean saying absurd things like "Wow I want to hug a pink, fluffy bunny rabbit, I mean more saying awkwardly phrased things).
You can use the same technique for dialogue, but instead ask yourself if you could see that character saying the sentence.
Here's for hoping he doesn't join a herd!
Cat porn maybe?
he found seananners' laptop
He must be delirious...or dumb...maybe both. Makes me wonder how he survived in a post apocalyptic world for so long with that kind of behaviour.
He's fucked
Dammit, he had such a good furry porn collection.
I'm hoping that the first sex crazed made to try to rape him gets shanked. With a knife. In the neck.
7244489 You are so violent! I love it!
3768433 Well......uh
She was the tallest of the 'three', since you are talking about all the 'new' mares, herself included.
I can only cringe at this phrasing, full of typos and plain wrongness. And why is he feeling BAD about what SHE did? If he regrets having done something to her that was perhaps exaggerated?
"I kinda felt bad about what I did to her. I wouldn't have done it if she had moved herself out of my way."
or,
"... I would not have had to remove her out of my way, if she had done so by herself."
This is much better and understandable.
El nuevo ambiente está alterando y mejorando cuerpo
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whelp he'll be missed
Dear Author:
this is the part you wanted to write, isn't it? ;D
I mean, for fuck's sake - this story is wasting no time at all to turn bizzare.
I didn't see this coming. Did anyone else see this coming?
So now we have heat troubles ex author's ass.
Great. /s
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That picture is creepy as fuck, dude.
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Tal ves está absorbiendo la magia y mejorando su estado físico
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Oh god oh no that has to be fore shadowing please no