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Do y'all thing the clop was decent? If so...
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4532755 It was certainly better than some of the clop I've read. Gonna give it a solid seven out of ten. Good chapter, seriously can't wait for the next one. Damn you anticipation!
wait, so the cycle is super close. thats an unfortunate time to show up in pony land!
You wont believe
also masturbating is miss spelled at the end
Hopefully there will be some more clop content from now on.
Nineteen chapters, 100k words and nearly a year when the sex and mature tag is present from the start is a long damn time to wait.
Its gonna be fun for Luna to explain to Isaiah why the she is ontop of him, why the bed is mushy and why there is a strong musk when he wakes up.
Good chapter and good clop. You only mispelled orgasm: "When her oragsim died down, much to her displeasure," but otherwise keep up the good work.
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I think you did a fine job for just getting your feet (and Luna's hooves) wet. But might I suggest not using the word "snatch", it's rather jarring.
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I guess you're right. At least it's better than cooter :P
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Thanks for informing me of the mistake, I've already got it taken care of!
4535752 Do you have an editor? I am quite sure that many of these guys would like to go over your work. It is brilliantly written, but the occasional grammatical error is noticeable.
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i think when you say "end" you mean "in"
I see what you did there. :3
Well..... That was something. I just hope it doesn't go to far. Well now I need to go play outlast so I can't shit myself.
did she just rape them?
I'm all for luna x Isaiah
Ooooh cadence and celestia you don't know...
Maybe you should check into Luna's bed chamber to find out
Lol the irony of thier thoughts...
Llamar la atención justo antes de la temporada de calor es muy bueno o muy malo