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So both Twilight and Chrysalis broke his trust. Is he going to place landmines around his shelter now? Afteral, he will notice it that someone has been into his shelter.
.....Shit..this is sound like Horny woman will do all the time...
ohh...now that explain why Cadance’s favorite say Luna really big.
5333531 I would not be surprised if he rigged a claymore to the door and maybe hang a few grenade bouquets around the place.
......ok, all this shit over the last 3 chapters is really starting to turn me off of this story. The way she's acting is WAAAAAY out of bounds, even for their fucked-up relationship.
One threat of sexual assault, with potential grevious bodily harm should she actually try all of them.
Two threats and attempt of sexual assault, one attempt of rape.
Well then your standards are absolutely, complete fucking insane.
Technically a third threat of sexual assault. Also, being a bitch because he defended himself.
Refer to comment on past chapter, specifically the part where Isaiah should be fucking right out of there and never returning.
So he told Luna and Celestia about what happened that night, and they took it in stride? No thoughts about how wrong it was? No thoughts about asking if he consented to the collars? That's just ridiculous. She raped him. No ifs, ands, or buts, Mi Amore Cadenza raped him. Even worse, she feels no remorse over her actions. Instead, she asks him if he wants to do it again! What the hell is wrong with her? Someone like that would be thrown in a psychiatric facility here, because they have some serious problems. Serious problems. As in, "threat to people's personally safety and possibly life" problems.
5334632 Obviously he disagrees. She ran the batteries out and he's still fine. Which means if he really wanted to he could of stopped her. Also, she sounds more joking with those "threats" , but you seem super serious about this work of fiction so I'm sure ill get a super serious response.
5334878 As 5333589 stated last chapter, he wanted to get away. He was thinking of pushing her off, removing the collars, and – in Isaiah's own words – escape. Only a person panicking to a good degree would think of that immediately, and when you're panicking that much that your first thought is "I need to get the hell out of here!" then there's a problem. A big problem. It doesn't matter if he's fine in the end, it's the principle of the matter at hand.
As for the threats, they were just that. You don't joke about it and then actually lunge at the person afterwards. The third one I can see as a joke, but not the second. If she was joking the second time though, that's one sick and twisted sense of humour. Would you say that, jump on your friend, and in the end say "Haha, it was a joke!"? I sincerely hope not.
5334878 Oh, and then there's the fact he might have PTSD from seeing that guy get electrocuted to death. You don't have to experience the trauma to develop it, and it didn't mention his age when he saw it happen.
King Kai: Nice Job Jack ass
5335148 YES!
I spent 4 hours looking for that!
Dammit, forgot to track this story, 4 chapters posted!
5334927 Not only that but how did Cadance know what the human electricity limit is? She took a HUGE gamble when she thought that Isaiah's electrical limit was the same as a pony. The pony limit could have been significantly higher then his; she could have easily turned him into a vegetable or electrocuted and killed him. Cadance could have fucked up big time.
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side effects may include wtf boners and frequent clopping.
5337594 have you just started reading this? If so I can't say anything as I wish not to spoil it.
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Now I think I know what you mean by claiming him, sex during heat...
5337911 kinda, at that time I meant more along the lines of a proper relationship. So that kinda happened.
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i agree with you, but if you read the protagonist character carefully he is awfully predictably perfect, its actually kinda boring how inhuman he actually is. unless this guy is a clinical psychopath with a severe disassociation from reality, his actions are very far from a social norm.
5340439 You know... I actually don't like the personalities of the mane 6 (with exceptions) and usually ignore most stories centred around them, especially shipfics. But, I like most of the personalities of the alicorn-types like the princesses (-Twilicorn), Chryssie and Nightmare.
So, what I'm trying to say is; Screw Twilight.
it's a surprise he is not more angry about the shock collar
5341665 Trust me, the later chapters are immensely better with grammar. I really need to go back to the the early chapters and fix them; maybe even change the first POVs to third POV.
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this
5343429 Read my latest blog post, it'll shed some light.
You know, I realize this is third-rate porn and all, but there is such a thing as going too far in breaking character to insert your own fucked up fetishes.
5505022 that's called being an ass hole.
Sorry man, I got through a forth of this chapter and I couldn't finish it. No one could have acted as kind as he was acting even with that going on I would expect someone to have a different kind of reaction to rape, I mean I tried but just...no. The whole rape thing ruined this story in general as well as Princess Cadence's attitude/reaction.
good lord these last few chapters have been a steaming pile of shit. What the fuck happened during this break that caused the protagonist to be replaced with someone else? There is no way this is the same person from chapters 1-29. Thank god the author was replaced
Damn.
I think this is my first honest-to-goodness downvote on this site.
I can live with the shitty writing, painful spelling... even the terrible grammar, I can swallow.
The character going from "every rapist should get buckshot to the groin" to "chillax, she only raped me is all" however, I can't accept.
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Yeah that's one thing that made me not really like the story as much