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Subtle fallout references shalt not pass me uncommented on.
Ten cool points for blowing up a Manticore!
Minus two for wounding yourself.
Uh, M67 fragmentation grenades have a five second fuse (or as we soldiers say, three second give or take two), not ten. Other than that, the story has my attention but is not far enough along for me to have a solid opinion on it.
2822006 Thanks for mentioning that, I wen't back and corrected my mistake .
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No problem. Glad I could help
Damn, Isaiah got hit at the leg again. That's twice in two days! That's some bad luck right there.
How often do you update, this is amazing!
I used to be a soldier like you then I took a manticore bone to the knee.
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Why?... Just...why?...
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We're gonna have to make a drinking game out of this.
"After we're done with this I demand that you explain you're self." Commanded the blue horse named Princess Luna.
"Luna, was it? Use you're weird super-power thing to jam it's mouth open!"
"Cover you're ears! " Yelled Isaiah as he sprinted away.
Should be "explain yourself", "your" & "your" respectively.
"Luna ripped a oak tree right out of the ground and threw it at the massive beast. The tree lodged it's self into the mouth full of jagged yellow teeth."
its there's no contraction here.
I was laughing at the mental image of an ENTIRE oak tree getting thrown at this thing , and then that manages to just hold its mouth open ? Wouldn't a branch make a bit more sense ? or just hold the mouth itself open with magic ?
I hope Luna is horrified by this brutal thing that explodes monsters.
Manticospolosion.
The universe seems to despise his legs .
A little bit rushed in the end there. Awesome otherwise.
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His legs are gorgeous, too gorgeous for the universe to tolerate.
Fuuuuck me, if the moon needs spotting.
I'd say he may have noticed the moon. The difference is subtle - you 'spot' something that's hard to see, but you 'notice' something that may've been plain as day (had you been paying any attention to it).
... and you took your house with you. Because you sometimes forget to put it down, I know - it happens to all of us.
Seriously, I'm sensing mixed ideas here.
Oh, so you do know the word.
Though, again, subtle but wrong. He already knew they were there - he put 'em in the ground himself - so there was nothing to notice. I suppose he may have remembered the mines, perhaps?
Nice to know he can kill just by sighting. ;] (hint: did he pull the trigger? did he fire a shot?)
(also, what happened to the 5th round? along with the 'chupa' he killed at the stream, I count four shots, and the rifle takes 5 rounds)