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Grevin5
I originally started on Fanfiction.net and decided to bring some of my work to this site. I hope you enjoy it.
Grevin5
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This story really caught my eye and it was fun to read. Moar chapters please. Also you should make 2 different stories for this in this 1 story. 1 Where he destroys equestria. And the other following the same thing as this. PS: The CMC were going to use WATER on FIRE. That just makes the fire bigger... Next time they should use something else.
If fluttershy dies i will murder you in the kindest way possible, for her sake
OH MY GOD!!!! Load the next chapter! I can't sleep until you do!
So finally here i hoped that you will show that story here because it will have more people reading and commenting here than on fanfiction.net
I can say that like this story.
Moar. Please.
Grevin: my fucking hero.
puh..Fluttershy is still alive
uhm? why is this knife here? 
good work man, I really want to know, where this story is going.
Great story
im looking forward too moar VERY soon!
THANK YOU for not killing Fluttershy
I am liking and faving it. The grimdark concept could play more on the flashbacks and such (Can't really stand seeing the innocent ponies getting hurt by the hero often). Though the dark concept could play off more on what he considers taboo then what we would consider as a thought. If you need any OCs I got plenty in my blog that you could use (not so good at stories but great at coming with characters).
Hey guys,
Thank you for all the positive feedback, I really appreciate it. Don't worry, there are lots more chapters coming. I've got nearly the whole thing planned out.
the hand/hoof shake thing is intressting. I have think about to and came to the idea of a small-telekenese-spell, that all ponys have.
Anyway....good work man
oh and sorry for bad english
Hell man I had to pick up my jaw off the ground after the scene with fluttershy. Good job and great story
good cpt...again
well no hush man, "slice of life" is not a bad think. for my part, write next 2-3 cpt in such a way.
Oh and the "Don´t see my face"-thing is such a silly, simple idea to get ours attendion.......and it works
Reminds me in the Hero, from the movie "Dragonknight forever" 
HOLY SHIT ANOTHER GOOD CHAPTER KEEP ON WRITEN'
DARN CLIFFHANGER!!
Damn You Cliffhangers!!!!!!!! Getting to the good part darn. Really good so far.
Great story!
MOAR!
Damn cliffhanger, oh well
This is a great story, keep it up
As I already said: Don´t feel bad about "skipping to around to much"
You have a fast Writing speed, so nobody blames you about stretching the story a little
wow they're dicks
MOAR DAMN IT!!!
first
Great chapter. I can understand with the sadness becoming overwhelming that suicide may seem to be the only option opened for him (Superstition, Racism, and more can drive people to the worst of mindsets). The only things that can keep a person or in my opinion any sentient being to continue living is good friends, family that actually cares, and possibly someone who cares deeply for that being (Love may be the only factor to stop the insanity). I am going to stop rambling and hope the your creativity continues to flow.
982766 I agree with that.ive tried a few times and my friends have always been there to help me out and keep my depression and insanity from getting worse and ending in the same place that they try to keep me from in the 1st place.
it was a great chapter
keep it up
“I wish the author would get it right...”
the rewrote has paid off, great chapter.
When are they going to figure out he's an element of (insert name here) ?
Atleast the cliffhanger wasn't as bad as the last one.... Lovin every bit of it though
Element of?????????? Sorry Fireeaters, no spoilers here. To be honest I don't know if I'll take that kind of route, all I can say is keep reading and I hope you enjoy it.
Good chapter me liek it good job
929471 Ok after reading this I have to ask. Death by feather tickling? lol
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I was thinking along the lines of suffocating in a pool of kittens and puppies that are all wearing socks and sipping on juice-boxes.
Have I now escaped my kind/cute demise ?
hehe well then, great cpt again
the drunken twilight scene was really cute and lovely, but I feel a little sorry for AJ, but then I remember that Twi is my favrite Pony, but then I remember that AJ is the sec. ....and now I´m
I wonder who´s become his specialsome pony?
)
(*whisper* have you even throught about Polygamy?
I wonder if Celestia will recognize the symbol on grevin's armor... I mean it was on the wall of her old castle, sooooo... Yeah! Plot progression!
Who knows, anything is possible
and again: a great and powerfull Tri...chapter^^
the grim scene was very nice and I like it that you don´t push the lovestory. 
and I like Grevins shy(?) and gentelman style, I wonder who´s become his lover ? 
(I see catfight on the horizon^^.....or threesome 
yes yes i´m a dirty little boy 
)
the reading and re-reading is totally pays off
i like this series, although i'm not sure i that i really like this new/nice grevin, liked iliked it more when he was mysterious and a bit cold. other than that awesome Fic.
To be honest I expected Grevin to meet the sisters much sooner. I mean since they are the leaders and all. But hey not complaining still a good story keep it up.
So does anyone have ideas as to what the next chapter will hold? I am curious as to what you guys think.
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Seriously? If your helpless little sister was around an unknown large scary-looking animal, you would've done the same.
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That doesn't make the fire bigger... You must be thinking of how you don't put water on an OIL fire.
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Due to your unneeded commas, I read the last part in Christopher Walken's voice.
1092080 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
This is awesome keep it up.
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Grevin's got a lot of work to do
As long as the quality and length of the chapter stays like it is now, a chapter a month is just fine. It's terrible to see a story go months without updating, and when it finally does, it's short and bad. So yeah, just take your time and keep up the good work.
Shit just got real. Great chapter! Probably the best so far.
By the way, can we vote on who he's shipped with?
1127047 I honestly didn't see that question coming. Part of me wants to see if I could write a good story with that kind of requirement while another part of me wants to let the story flow and see how things turn out....so in short I don't know
. I will have to think on that one...perhaps I could write up a short A.U. kind of thing once I'm between stories....yeah this story should have a sequel if I do things right. 
. Thanks for the feedback and good question.
Very good story so far. Your writing style is excellent, and you have a great sense of pacing in my opinion. Most of the human OC stories listed under clop I've seen so far have been some kind of unrealistic crap where the reaction of the OC on finding they've been ripped from their world into one populated by technicolour ponies could best be described as "dull surprise". That doesn't happen here. Also, they rush the romance to the point of absurdity ("Hey, I just met you 5 minutes ago, and you're a squishy pink eldritch abomination with wiggly bits on its hooves, but you're totally hot so let's have awkwardly written horse sex"), which you don't. Both ponies and human have the same initial reaction, which is quite understandable: "Wtf is that thing?". There hasn't been much in the way of clop yet, but please don't go through the whole harem dynamics rigmarole, I beg you. If this turns into a protracted game of "which one do I pick?
Oh, I better contemplate my navel some more and reject their advances..." it'd be a travesty, given how good it's been so far. If you can keep the romantic aspect at a decent pace without Grevin's refusals becoming repetitive and boring, this will probably end up being one of the best human fics I've read on this site. Grevin is an interesting and generally well balanced OC, and most of the characters seem IC, so good job 
.