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When are they going to figure out he's an element of (insert name here) ?
Atleast the cliffhanger wasn't as bad as the last one.... Lovin every bit of it though
Element of?????????? Sorry Fireeaters, no spoilers here. To be honest I don't know if I'll take that kind of route, all I can say is keep reading and I hope you enjoy it.
he is da elahment of WAAGH!! E lets da anger flow phrew em and E smashes stuff reahl noice he May noht be da greanest but tghe WAAGH!! trahn-...transc-..awrot umm it meahns he dont need ta be ahn Oark to use it. need a translation... TOO BAD!!
oh no dont let little apple bloom startle him and get hurt, that would break my heart (YOHOHOHO!!!)
liking it and hoping it stays this good
1967521 out of here, green skinned filth! The Emperor purge you of your damnation!
...The emotional connections are too easy. Needs more time, he is traumatized after all, and he doesn't show enough discomfort at reliving painful parts of his past....I think you should work on some of that.
I agree with Ikiostar. He told a very dark aspect of his past to beings from another world who he only knows for around a week. In that one week he was tight lipped, formal and polite. So it seems inconsistent.
Wait a second....doesen't Vinyl Sratch have red eyes too ?!
4871706 yeah she does but in most stories she has her shades on to hide it.
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Or has magenta colored eyes like Rainbow.
7012351 my answer is MAGIC lol not really you make a valid point
Any person with that background would only have taken off the gantlets.
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Agreed.
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(Stone cold hard add me) "Well then, I appreciate all you have all done for me. But I believe it is time I take my leave..."
* Then .....just like take he and all his possessions with him or that was his were gone. No signs of a teleportation or even footprints *
(Stone cold hard ASS me again) " I've a much better idea Ms.Applejack, I'm just leave this place entirely and go with my original plan. "
"And that would be why'd partner?"
" The Everfree Forest. Good day Ms.Applejack as well for the rest of you and your friends days. "