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I think I need to find a new way of getting my stories on to the site...the formatting that I work really hard on always fouls up when I copy and paste it...any suggestions guys? Does Google Docs work well?
Well...I don't know the protocol for this site, but I just saw my story in the list of various stories that you see at the top of the page...did I get featured? Anyone know the answer to this? If I'm wrong that's fine I just want to know if I am guessing right or not.
argh, stupid mares and their feelings
I hope Discord, Davick, and anyone else Discord has summoned into Equestria, die extremely slow, excruciatingly painful depths. The kind of deaths that only Jigsaw could think of. Or something like this.
Such idiocy to leave Davick alive. There are times when killing (others would stoop to callig it murder) a man like Davick should not be left to petty things such as ethics and morals. They really think after what happened that Davick is just gonna sit around and do nothing? There are times when killing someone is neccessary for the safety of others.
Great chapter, tho Discord is still a evil *********. But it fits with the story so...yea
Oh...and gratz with getting featured
3167539 Gdocs is nice and all, but it has some issues. namely with formatting. Google uses some special formatting characters that some other programs don't recognize properly. I learned this while editing for someone. I copied and pasted the chapter from gdocs into Microsoft Office so that it would be easier to edit, then copied it back into gdocs. when the author looked it over he noticed that the formatting had changed in some areas. mainly with indentations. So be weary. Wish I could be of more help, but I'm not familiar with the uploading part of the story process.
Whoa, that scene reminds me of Naruto...
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And why didn't he kill him. I understand he didn't want the mane 6 to witness that but desperate time calls for desperate measures. He should've killed that a-hole.
3168398 DEATH TO THE DEMON OF CHILD PAIN BRINGING!
there are limits to how stupid you can be even as a child. The CMC passed that bar. Like there are no words to describe how much i hate their idiocy atm
Boy, that fight scene was cheesy and cliched as hell!
3169269 I'll try to so better next time.
We need tracking microchips implanted in to the CMC, they cause soo much trouble.
Oh man his valor will get him SO LAID when he get up! But in all seriously here he is very strong and I like his secrifice for the mane 6 I love your work and hope your story gets featured.
3167856 This.
This right here.
I have read SO many stories where semi-evil or outright evil-as-fuck dudes come to Equestria and learn the magic of friendship, and when an OBVIOUSLY UN-FUCKING REDEEMABLE villain comes along, the ponies manage to make him NOT kill said villain.
Then the villain survives, gets away and comes back later and starts killing tens of thousands and pillaging and raping with his/her/it's army of doom. Yeah. Sometimes, killing the villain is the lesser of two evils and I wish that some protagonists would learn that. Bloody hell, I feel like making a story where eventually, such a bad guy comes along, Twilight or maybe Fluttershy beg the main character not to deal the final blow, he/she stops, looks at them, and says something along the lines of
"Are you insane? Do you not SEE all this that he has wrought upon your kind? Are you blind to the thousands of deaths caused by this scum, or do you just not care? If I let him live, then what? We wait for him to come back with a greater army, new powers and MORE EVERYTHING!!? IS THAT WHAT YOU WANT, HUH? FOR MORE PONIES TO DIE, because you can't bring yourselves to understand that this is who I am, what I do and what has shaped me? Are you going to deny my reason for clinging to life, deny me vengeance for my comrades who died with daggers in their backs and poison in their foods? because you can't understand that this must be done? Sometimes, little pony, saving someone is impossible. Trying to will just lead to him doing this again! I know this."
before the main character kills the bad guy and then walks away, hat/hood pulled dramatically low and bloodstained and maybe torn duster/coat/scarf/whatever flapping even more dramatically-in slow mo-in the wind.
Also, everyone go watch Katekyo Hitman Reborn! right now. It's kind of boring for the first arc or so, but it picks up later on. Seriously, it's amazing.
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This right here.
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3171277 Exactly. There are people that can't be redeemed no matter what you try. Some people just don't seem to understand sometimes killing someone is a neccessity. Someone as evil as Davick is, you really think sparing his life would make him all nice and shit? NO!! He'll go to find allies, train himself and make himself stronger for the next confrontation. Its cause of thinking that anybody can be redeemed that I think if it was actually possible to be sent to Equestria, think i'd rather go as a gryphon then a pansy bitch pony.
He should have killed Davick. By leaving him alive he just sentences many innocent lives to their death. It is wrong to leave him alive.
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFFHANGER
3167820....holy shit....
A quick question, just started reading. Is the person in the picture supposed to be him? because it hasn't mentioned wings
3223662 I cannot say at the moment...plot points and all.
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Me? I'd make him immortal, but still be able to feel pain, strip him of everything, then throw him in the highest security dungeon cell where he is raped for all eternity
Oh for fuck's sake! It's called a SHEATH!! Not holder, or holster, or anything else you've called it, SHEATH!!!
If you're gonna put swords in a story, fucking learn the names of anything associated with them!
" “Vinyl, leave the poor mare alone, besides I’m sure he would prefer a symphony and a classy dinner.” "
"On top of that she also hopped she wouldn’t be bothered by too many mare who were now curious about the mysterious warrior who saved Canterlot…stupid whorse’s who simply wanted to try and get him as some sort of status symbol."
3171277 This is old but it is freaking dramatic and it has spoken for me.