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Comment posted by Pwn13s deleted Oct 12th, 2013

Nope shadow was more of my try out story darkness is something else gonna try and rewrite the first chapter

3503492 yeah was hoping someone commented on that shoulda done Dat ass instead

3503492 question who do you think Ray should make his first move on ? i hearing from my readers.

Comment posted by knightmarepony deleted Nov 26th, 2013

3508505 my vote goes to fluttershy:yay:

3540367 Awesome ill get to work on that. At the moment I'm trying to just get him situated in Ponyville and meeting some other ponies along with Fluttershy, Applejack, and Twilight

Boys just ignore...and we see all we want :trollestia:

I think that one of the mares starts heavily interviewing him and finds out about his horrible past. He runs out, and she pursues. Then she kisses him...and you can take it from there

Once again just a suggestion

Interview "hint hint":twilightsmile:

Once again just sayin have :ajsmug: keep on asking questions and then when when he finishes he runs out and hides and the mane 6 try to find him and AJ is the one to find him. Big emotional scene blah blah blah.

3726432 those do sound good just don't know how I'm gonna do the next chapter its name is Wolf in sheeps clothing though.

But I am wondering how darkness is getting this much view time for the last few weeks that's what's been showing up with favorites

For people wondering why its taking. Awhile for this next chapter I'm trying do rewrite wolf after looking it over I had decided I did not like where I went with it so I'm trying to do a rewrite

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Please hurry up because I'm running out of stuff to read and this is one of my favorite series! :rainbowkiss:

3740337 should be done sometime this week I don't have as much time on my hands as I would like

Walking through the house Ray had just woken up walking up a flight of stairs he stepped into the bathroom ignoring the show pouring himself a glass of water he drank it then went back down stairs. Standing in the shower AJ was washing her mane and tail thinking back to yesterday for some reason she couldn't get Ray out of her head hearing the door open she peeked out about to ask Fluttershy for a towel when Ray walked by mouth agape she watched him get water drink and leave eye twitching she mumbled "he didn't even notice me."
Laying back on the couch Ray muttered "AJ has a nice ass." and with that drifted back off to sleep.

LAWL i died
Spiderman: Lawl he dead

Dayum! :fluttershysad: drops dat bomb on Ray like Vinyl Scratch drops da bass!

3746154. That's what you need tah do with a evolved

for the love of all gods pleaz wright mover :flutterrage: its so awsome:fluttercry:

3827266 time that's all I ask for trying to figure out what to do next

3827348 ok :pinkiehappy: and i meen more i miss spelled that my bad:derpytongue2:

Comment posted by Kamen Rider Dragons deleted Jan 24th, 2014

Dude...I just...More...Please, the epicness is amazing! :pinkiehappy:

3909372 I know I've just been busy with school and things

3910785 Oooh! Okay then, here have a smilie! :twilightsmile:

Hahaha :rainbowlaugh: great chapter! :rainbowkiss:

Ha! I love it! :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by KillerSteel deleted Feb 14th, 2014
Comment posted by Gazpacho deleted Feb 19th, 2014
Comment posted by Gazpacho deleted Feb 19th, 2014

Dis Gonna Be Good

I think Applejack I don't see many OCXApplejack fics

like many others would have likely have said in about as many words

DDDDDDAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUMMMMM

4057679
True, very true


(Needs more A's)

Comment posted by Dragon Blaze-X deleted Mar 31st, 2014
Comment posted by Lollolasd deleted May 3rd, 2014

Um question: When is this going to be updated?

What an odd reaction... I personally would be like "heh you're fluffy" or "oh god a giant dog person!" Or even "I knew something was in that drink this morning"

Evolved are singular masses meaning no bones to crack. All Blacklight individuals are immensely heavy as shown when Mercer and Heller crush cars by jumping a few feet in the air. Oh and they need biomass to live... Meaning he needs some animals or them ponies are super dead XD

OH MY GOD TWILIGHT HAD A TENDRIL WITH HER?! She's so dead XD actually it's never shown what happens when large parts of a Blaklight are taken off. Do they dissolve? Do they try to become a new person? Who knows? XD

Uh wait... Did he eat a pony?! XD because it's that or he has McGuffin powers that come out of nowhere

It's sad really. Dana loved Alex but that didn't stop him and James's love for his daughter made him kill tons of people. Sorry Fluttershy but love just encourages them XD also on a side note where are all these rapists and stuff coming from?! 6 to 2 doesn't translate as arseholes everywhere XD

Yeah a woman doesn't want to left alone on her period. She wants you there to be as miserable as her and giving her massages XD

Punching an Evolved would be like punching a rhino... But you'd probably not break your hand punching a rhino

Evolved don't bleed so he's leaking liquid flesh XD

Evolved don't tire so he could pump her like a piston for days and he'd still be able to run faster than most jets

Fluttershy is pregnant!

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