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Tenna is a changeling. Tenna wants to fit in. But most of all, Tenna wants to be herself. Can the timid changeling overcome her fear and show her real self?
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Awesome cover art by Candle_Jack

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 142 )

Only one problem with it. there are only two Chapters!:twilightsmile:

There's only 3 things I see wrong with this...

1.) There's no chapter 3 - 5,320,451.

2.) There's very few moments of D'aww that make me D'aww out loud, need moar, demmet!

3.) My want for moar is killing me. So please, make more.

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You are my new favourite person.
..You do realize this is a chapter story, correct?

Nice Avatar ref ^^ I like!

That was more fun than trying to memorize spells.:twilightsmile:

This is an instant favorite

When is the next chapter coming out??!?

i see potential lots of potential keep it up its been pretty good so far.

Tech. I see what you did there. Haha.

Great story. Definitely following this one. There is always something about changelings I love. Maybe its their mysteriousness. Who knows.

Also, I feel so bad for Tenna. I wanna hug her right now.

So THAT'S why there are no cabbages in Ponyville... :pinkiegasp:

I am interested. Will read on when not horribly sleep deprived!

Rainbow seems a little OOC in this chapter. :rainbowhuh:

the two people who downvoted this have no taste.

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“-Celestia and luna, but really, they are the princess’s-”

In the cannon timeline of the show the only known princess/alicorns are Celestia and Cadence. luna does not appear to be known tell after nightmare moon and before that nightmare moon was just a fairytale.

Also love the Avatar reference.

must haz moar. but first, sleep.

Because someone had to post it....

I saw totally same (few times already)concept but lets see how it will roll

...and Rainbow muddles up everything yet again.:facehoof:
Learn to observe.:ajbemused:
This doe snot bode well for Tenna!:fluttershysad:
Awaiting further releases.:twilightsmile:

This has real potential! MOAR!!!

And this story is going straight to my top ten Changeling story.

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Haha, always. ^^

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I was worried about that. It's not that she's not a great pony (RD is in my top three), but she seemed the perfect character for this, to barge into a situation without getting all the information first.

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Dammit, I thought I had fixed that...
Anyway, thanks for bringing that to my attention! It is now fixed.

Alright. Question. When does this take place? Right now, I'm getting a mid S1.

Don't you think everypony, ESPECIALLY Twilight, would realize a changeling post-wedding?

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Oh, hey, thank!

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Yeah. Currently, we're going to try to mirror the show, and we're in the middle of episode one. We'll diverge and merge with the show on certain eps, and some original content most of the time.

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Oh. Then this makes perfect sense!

You haven't done enough to get a thumbs up, but I will favorite and stay tuned...

I like it, I like it alot more please!

I knew that “MY CABBAGES!” was a reference to Avatar. Nice one. :pinkiehappy:

The Cabbage Merchant is best character in ANYTHING:pinkiehappy:

Great story so far. Just noticed a couple little hiccups, though.

Tenna nodded, keeping a wary eye on the crowd around several outside tables, eating what looked like a late dinner. Keeping a wary eye on the gathering she saw a few of the ponies look over and nod in their general direction, but for the most part the gathering ignored the. Applejack led her around the gathering, keeping a little distance between them and the dinner.

Should probably change 'the' to 'her'.

“Rainbow? Dammit, that girl needs to think before doing stuff like this. This is third time month that she’s sent someone crying. What was she thinking, making that sweet pegasus cry like that.” Applejack complained to Tech.

Third time this month, maybe?

moaaaar..... MOAAAAAARMOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

A call of affirmation came into the house before the

I doubt that's entirely finished. Might wanna fix that.

Tenna tried to talk, and it came out in a hoarse voice.

Haha, oh puns. Because PONIES!

... I'll see myself out.

This has potential. It's too early to tell if it is a really good fic, but... so far so good :].
MOAR!!!

I give Tenna a hug and hopes she feels better. Anyway great story so far I'm really enjoying it. Probably because it has a changeling and man they are awesome. But anyway great job can't wait to see the next chapter. Peace.

Where's Tenna, I need to hug her and give her a Yoshi plushie. She needs a Yoshi to keep her happy. That and she needs a fresh baked my Grandmother Smith apple pie. (yes my grandmother's last name is Smith and she has her own recipe for apple pie, aren't I lucky:pinkiehappy:)

All your hopes are belong to us?

Nice story so far.

Great story so far.
Keep it up!

Comment posted by bass-clef deleted Sep 22nd, 2014

Good story. Added it to a few of the main folders in Twilight's Library :twilightsmile:

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Thanks~
Twilight's Library? I'll check it out.

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It will be under AU and Adventure

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Thanks once again. Seems like an awesome place to be in.

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