Rumble's constantly told he's a cute colt, from most mares and even a few other colts. But, for the most part it's been that. Maybe it's been a passing comment, or maybe someone tried to pay him a compliment. And, for the most part, Rumble hasn't minded.
However, when his brother Thunderlane calls Flitter and Cloudchaser over one night to foalsit, Rumble begins to suspect something may be wrong, especially when the two adult pegasi mares begin going beyond just calling him cute. When mares across Ponyville start fawning over the colt, Rumble decides he simply needs the help of a unicorn to stop a strange form of innate pony magic not usually found in pegasi.
Featured on 1/3/2015.
REVIVED on 4/5/2016.
Apparently featured on TVTropes.org MLP:FiM Shipfic Recommendations page.
Flitter x Thunderlane / Rumble x Cloudchaser will be involved; no sex.
[Cover art from MrPoniator and found here in gif form.]
Oh gawd, straight from Derpibooru.
Shame there's no Rumble/CC shipping but cute nonetheless.
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That was me. This is it. More to come later when I'm not so tired.
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I'm debating adding it. Not entirely sure yet.
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Do it, you know you want to. Not nearly enough of that on fimfic.
i shall add this story to "read later" and give it thumb up
so freaking cute
This looks like a rather promising story. I look forward to reading more of it as it comes out. Keep up the great writing!
Awesome awesome awesome
i cant WAIT! to see where this is going I guess rumble will get miss cherlie as tutor in math
and damn he IS a mare magnet i mean 5 fillies around you, wow just wow i wish i had sutch luck with the ladies
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4 fillies (Archer, Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom) and 1 colt (Pipsqueak). Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon were supposed to be jeering at him.
This work so far.
I would like to see this continue!
32 likes. 0 dislikes.
That's an academy record.
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I'm hoping that doesn't jinx me.
This story is in Struggling Authors' romance section, but it doesn't have a romance tag. You should probably fix that.
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It might have some later, but for now I've removed it from the folder.
Geez. two hours to finish math homework? What kind of math homework is Cheerilee assigning? Calculus?
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No. You could say math is not Rumble's strongest subject.
JUSTICE WAS SERVED THIS DAY!!!!!!!!
I feel bad for Silver Spoon, though.
I know how Rumble feels when it comes to math. Here's my school experience with math in a nutshell. One plus one is...uh...gazorninplatt .(No, wait, that's geography!)
I like this story, so I'm giving it an upvote.
Rumble, the Hue Hefner of Equestria
Looks like Rumble is becoming popular.
Oh snap, this is getting out of hoof
Anyways, nice of you finally updating i have just been waiting, and waiting, and waaaiting, and CUBCAKE!
Ugh bad cupcake
I really like where this story is going I wonder meh never mind
and I especially like how he just diddn't see it coming, just one day all the fillies and mares sees rumble and instant
Even though i wonder what will happen now? and i really hope you won't wait several months to update it again
Reminds me of another fic where Braeburn has innate magic that makes colts gay when he's nearby.....god, what was the title?
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AAAAAAAAAAAAArientation.
Wow, some dick seriously had to downvote it because you mentioned it had no dislikes. SPINELESS WORMS!
Looks like fimfiction ate your formatting, the last half of the chapter is centered.
What's with the centralized text?
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Fixed; I put a [ center] instead of a [ /center],
Reminder: Archer is a EARTH PONY!!!!!
Rumble needs to find his true love before every mare, single or married, gets ready to rumble.
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Fixed; Archer is now referred to as an earth pony wherever there was a mistake.
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I will not go much higher than Everyone for this one. Which technically would be a first for me not going to Teen.
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Hell yesh ! Finally mor!
3620290 autocorrect only works when you don't want it apparently
rumble: I NEED AN ADULT! I NEED AN ADULT!
Rumble's DAMN adorable, even if he hates it.
3639015 He needs to stop hating it and start milking it.
Probably just lock the kid up in his room for two days just to be safe.
3639129 ....just fyi, It sucks to have a fanclub. It's a long story, and I don't feel like explaining how much is WRONG with the fact that I have one.
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Pretty much everyone that has a fanclub notes that there's one or two crazies in there somewhere.
3639184 There's 9 members, 3 of which are convicted felons. One of which is a Pansexual Rapist.
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3639200 Yeah, You see? Fanclubs may only have a few crazies, but these crazies are TOTALLY FUCKED UP.
Last I checked, it was Flitter who let him lay in her lap.
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Thank you for the catch; it has now been changed.
3639897 Your welcome.
Who's the smexiest Pegasus around?
Who's the flying love machine?
Rumble!
That Rumble's a bad mutha...
Shut yo' mouth!
I'm just talkin' about Rumble.
Then we can dig it.
Some guys have all the luck. This story keeps getting better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Dawwwww!