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I make really stupid stories, but it's fine since I enjoy making them.

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Rumble has to fly down from Cloudsdale to PonyVille and do some errands, some of which were Thunderlane's tasks in the first place. However, his couch potato of a big brother is reluctant, leading the diligent colt to take matters into his own hooves. Rumble doesn't have the slightest ounce of worry in his mind, but he should: His toned pecs aren't ready for the world to see yet. Aged up Rumble, meaning that he is of teenage age. INNUENDO. Title changed because there is another story out there that has the word mare-magnet in the title. :(

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 39 )

Oh why, Rumble, WHY

Okay, I hope you make the next chapter because this story is great :twilightsmile:

Rumble is my favorite character from the show even though he doesn't appear much in the show, he's my favorite because he looks cool and other things

Really, I hope you update soon, I want to know what other mares would do to Rumble

You should continue this bro

Comment posted by Evil HERO Malicious Bane deleted Jan 7th, 2014

I can see that there could be an obvious pattern here. With the mention of "Carousel Boutique", my immediate thought was the CMC was in for some Rumble action :ajsmug:

Anyhoo, this was a fun read and I am awaiting more.

This'll be fun. I'd totally like to see a follow up. Though, if I had a choice, I'd like a Rumble/Scootaloo pairing. I prefer my sweetie belle with Button Mash.

CONTINUECONTINUECONTINUE!!!

Advice:

:duck:'s sister

Here's an advice

Do not let a wonderful piece of work go to waste :coolphoto:

3763053 er, thanks. Sry for the lack of updates, my mind isn't really there these days.

3763116 What's wrong ? Let me guess, school or social life ?

3763131 a little mix of both.

SB ! :unsuresweetie: srysly haha

Well, this story unexpectedly got quite the number of views, lel

3790137
So you should better continue! I read it, and I loved it.

P.S: What's an Innuendo?

3824990 innuendo is a word or phrase that implies content of sexual nature.

WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER :flutterrage: THE WAITING IS KILLING ME ! :raritycry:

3857490 lel it is coming out but I have so much shit in life to do.... :ajsleepy: Won't be free for much of the week because of Chines New Year :(

GREAT CHAPTER ! ! ! ! ! :pinkiehappy:
This story deserves 5 out of 5 stars.

What's the next story going to be called ? I'm guessing Scootaloo is next because of Rainbow Dash, am I right ?

3883931 Thanks based samurai next chapter is gonna be about Rumble getting flank so it won't be disappointing, I hope

After reading this, I doubt the next story won't disappointing. In other words, I think the next story is going to be amazing

This story gets a "10 outa 10"

Please tell me the sequel is coming soon :fluttershysad: I'm losing my mind !!!!!!!!!!

3956604 pls wait I haven't even started :(( you should go bother Cosmonaut instead!

3957476 in all honesty I think cosmo is a better Rumble writer.

4010717 you hesitated on your reply. For a week. :(((

4010731 I didn't hesitate, after seeing that last reply of yours again, it look like your doubting yourself, so I thought I'd replied back

Comment posted by Evil HERO Malicious Bane deleted Mar 28th, 2014

4146962 ahaha I am fine thanks very much. I know how much you love this series but unfortunately I really can't do much at the moment. Continuing this fic is one of my higher priorities, trust me.

Apple Bloom! Welcome to the Friend Zone.

Comment posted by Evil HERO Malicious Bane deleted Jun 21st, 2014

4147345 I'm not trying to be rude here, but WHERE IS THE STORY AFTER THIS !?

Hehe, I'm the one with "Mare Magnet". :P I'm kind of pressed for time, but I'll give it a read; I like seeing other takes on the subject.

Good story. You earned a new follower.

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