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Trofl, you sir, are a genious.
This... i... yup I'm broken. Lol
I'll give a like for the devious pun.
This was actually worth the read. *clop-clop*
ShotgunNeko? Cousin? Is that you?!
Devious.
Good clop and an amusing story all together.
2112076 thank you very much! i really appreciate that
2111701 hehe glad you liked!
2111358:cousin?? oh cousin! It's so nice to see another family member roaming this site. We nekos need to stick together
2111344 thank u very much! glad you hung in till the end hehe
2111237 thank u!
2111226 hehehehe
2110952 genius? me? why thank u!! you sir, are too kind!
Role Playing made to look like the usual random clop at first. Nicely done too! The ending was just the right amount of funny as well!
This is just..... ..... if u need me ill be in my bunk
.....Sir, write out Twi's vision...please..
2112260I couldn't agree more!
that
bit was awfully close to a scene in RealityCheck's null[/url ][url=Nightmare Night and Nyx]nullBOTH scenes are hilarious! GOTCHA! like and fave
LOL Luna's reaction but good read. @____@
You... seem to have an aversion to separating paragraphs.
I'm pretty sure this doesn't qualify as a formal document!
Anyway, very adorable, yet kinky moment between the two. At first, I was worried because it seemed to be incredibly predictable and overly convenient as to how Twilight gave in so quickly, but then I saw it wasn't the story itself being that way, it was just Twilight and Luna's fantasies WITHIN the story. Really ended up saving it there. Good story but... seriously, this isn't a standardized essay! I just personally hate how compact and "Wall-O-Text" like those are! /personal irritant
2115036 pragraphs! where?? *hiding* lol jk actually I usually write using microsoft word and then I just copy and paste....no matter what i do this is how they paste in....so i thought it was a site thing...i am still trying to navigate the site...but now that you mentioned....maybe ill look into it and see how it can be fixed....thanx for the review
2113778 thank you very much! i aim to please
2113608 lol i read this before you edited it and i was like huh wha.....haha u did get me!
2112941 lol a vision for twi? hmmm good idea...maybe in the future
2112431 thank u thank u! im glad u thought so
2112482 bwahahaha...for that comment ill send molestia to find u
Indeed! Probably the best story I've read all year! Well done, good sir. Ignore those moaning about paragraphs. If the story is good, then there isn't a need.
Some of the best shit I ever clopped to
Very well made you dirty-minded porn writer, very well made indeed.
This is the most entertaining one shot clop I've read.
Works like this is why I check clop sometimes, and finding it worths reading through so much mindless trash.
2118935 wow thank u! glad u enjoyed it! ;)
2118177 hahaha i think ive found my calling with clopfics thank u im glad u enjoyed!
2117335 very very kind words! glad u enjoyed the fic ..
this shit makes me want to follow you k :3
I CAME!
to the conclusion that you have a dirty mind.
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Kinky Twilight is one of the better Twilights
Kinky Twilight
is fun.
Just a few errors I noticed, easily found with Ctrl+F:
… “Nightmare moon cackled” – ‘moon’ should be capitalized.
… “Nightmare moon watched” – See above.
… “Are you haven’t” – The line should likely be ‘Are you sure you haven’t’.
The double (sometimes triple) spacing between words was somewhat strange at first, but I got used to it: I often point them out as errors, but I took notice of the frequency you used them with, so I believe they were intentionally used.
Onto the story: Strangely endearing for a clopfic involving Twilight Sparkle and a pony that isn't one of her close friends from the series. I suppose Luna is one of the more adorable alicorns in the show, so it only makes sense, but I must give credit where credit it due: To you, for your writing of their characters in such a way that it made them so wonderful to read in this story.
I could call it a clopfic, sure, but most clopfics I've read lack a true... well, I don't wanna reveal anything from the fic that one might consider too spoiler-worthy. Regardless, this was highly entertaining, and certainly worth more views than it has... well, take that statement as you will, but it deserves some recognition for its entertainment value, at the very least!
2138425 thank u for the r and r! i will fix those grammatical mistakes when i have a moment. I am glad that overall you enjoyed the fic! thank u for the kind words regarding it getting more views than it has
2129619 love that clip!
2120534 agreed!
2120320 bwahaha i laughed out loud at ur comment! awesome!
2119284 thank u thank u! i promise ill write more "shit" similar to this in the future hehe
I loved it!
SEQUEL!!!
With Twilights idea!!!
NOW!!!
Ok this purked me up today after 10 hours of patrolling our base and a large ass firefight this really made my day good sir now I'm going to crash in my bed
2167664
Well, someone certainly has an interesting life.
Damn straight you should be working that story! We are in sore need a Dr. House fix! We are in withdrawal here man!
No wait, never mind! Wrong fic, same title!
Want more...
2151797 What HE/SHE siad!
2148998 thank you very much!
2151797 lol there is a sequel now....i am still waiting to incorporate twilight's idea for the trilogy lol
2167664 always glad to be helpful
2170052 if you haven't already then checkout the sequel fic.....nightmare night--the dark mare rises lol ...if you have already done that then i can only promise more smutty works like this in the future!
So maybe a third....
How about a surprise if you make a third. Magical cum really can make one pregnant!
Very well written and a thoroughly enjoyable read ;p Definitely one to add to my favorites list. Now what was this about a sequel... I shall have to go read it now... xD
>It was bitter, but not horrible.
BINGO AS FUCK
Fantastic!!! Omigosh gimme MORE smut!!!
I will be thinking about this one for a while lol. Gotta say, I'm like totally excited about the idea of a Luna/Nightmare/Twilight three way!!!
Neko, your writing truly is legendary!!! I bow to thee!!!
LLLLOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL
wait
where was Spike?!?!
: here
oh hi
i wonder if twi really did become preg or not... oh well... we will never know... dun dun dun!
3141071 if u read the sequel...nightmare night the dark mare rises (and of course I suggest u do) u can find out lol
3141416 selling yourself i see? like a cheap whore! good job :D
MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!!
I IT!!!
... wait HAND!?
Very erotic! OMG!
I loved every bit of it! Lol!
WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE PLEASE!!
You have to write another story!! A threesome would be awesome!!! Oh yea, and will Twilight get Prego?? That would be epic!!
I loved it
3141416 I just spent about 3.8minutes laughing about the name of the chapter for some reason
This. This is awesome.
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