Earl of Grey
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Seems interesting. Looking forward to more.
Hmmmm... an interesting premise. I shall be following this story with great anticipation of great things! This first chapter was quite well written.
New TwiiLuna and a giant Fuck you to Physics? I'm totally in..
This looks like good stuff. "Sleepless in Ponyville" became one of my favorite episodes the moment I saw it, and a good Twiluna based around the concept makes me really happy. Check the following:
Missing a closing quote here.
While I don't want to make presuppositions as to your intent, "prodigal" (wastefully extravagant) seems like a poor word choice here. Perhaps "prodigious"?
The only thing that took me out of the story a little was when Twilight mentioned having prepared a 16-page speech then shortened it down to 100 words. That seems like something you just wouldn't remember in a dream, at least that specifically, unless she actually dreamed about writing the whole thing before the story began, which seems like an awfully dull dream to have...
Other than that minor thing, this story was great, and I'm definitely looking forward to more. Especially the promised mature parts!
This should be a few flavors of interesting. Looking forward to it.
Come on! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey! That's one of my drawings there!
:D
That feels great!
Time for a mass-reply post!
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*Takes a series of slow, deep breaths*. Okay, Earl. No big deal. It's only Skywriter, one of the authors you look up most to on the entire site and one of your major inspirations... yep, no big deal...
Okay, slightly-awkward hero-worship aside, I'm glad you liked the story, and thanks for the corrections. I just fixed them now.
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You did great work, and I'm very happy that I found your art when I did. Keep it up!
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I figured Twilight, being the egghead that she is, would have very vivid, logical, and well-constructed dreams. Her obsessive-compulsive tendencies and analytical mind seemed like they would lend themselves well to more realistic dreams, rather than the usual weirdness we're used to. That particular line was really more of a one-off thing played for comedy, but I can see where you're coming form and hope this clears it up.
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More will be coming soon, I promise. Patience gets you many things in life. In the mean time, I do have another story you could check out if you so desire. (Not to shamelessly promote myself or anything).
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Oh stop it, you!
This actually feels like it could be part of the show, something happening behind the scenes that we don't quite see.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I see a lot of potential with this story, yes I think I'll follow.
Of course being a fan of Twiluna helps a lot too.
Bit early on throwing out the sex tag.
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FiMFiction rules require you to tag your story for Mature content if you know you're going to have it, even if it doesn't appear until later in the story. It's a way to keep from "leading your readers on", or making people who don't want mature content to end up reading it accidentally.
Oh wow. I just finished reading it. It looks promising! I like it!
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Ah. I see. Silly rules giving away plot points to stories way ahead.
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Seriously? Well, that's flattering. Thanks very much! Oh, and congrats on hitting #1 in the Feature Box with this.
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What? Oh, so it has! Awesome!
Ooh, interesting. I must find out more.
...wait. Why the mature and sex tags, then? Anticipating any future occurrences in the dreamscape?
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See this comment.
*Comes here expecting dream clop*
Hang on, let me find the words. Is it....BUCK YOU. AND BUCK YOU. AND BUCK YOU!!!!
One can only dream of a good Luna clop...
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Patience. There will be clop, I promise. I'm not sure if you've noticed, but this is tagged as "incomplete". If all goes well, the intimate scenes should start some time around chapter 3 or 4.
Sorry to keep you waiting.
Ah, excellent. TwiLuna is always good, especially from a great author such as yourself. I think this story has a lot of potential, keep up the good work.
This story kinda reminds me of The Dark Apprentice by Come Hither. But they're really only similar in general ways. I just hope you don't go on indefinite hiatus half way through the story like Come Hither has! hehe.
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Don't worry, I have no plans to do that. Updates may be a little slow depending on certain circumstances outside my control, but rest assured the story will be finished.
A Twiluna? Must read. Wait this is a clop fic? EVEN BETTER!
NOOOOOOO
1888524They should start around 3 and 4.... good, a nice long fic.
I'm surprised there arent any 'Aurum Potestas Est' comments.
I like the magic aspects so far. With some future mature Twiluna to boot.
I approve of the direction this is heading
I am curious to see how the 'clop' begins... what do they study that drives them to that?
Okay, this sounds like an awesome idea AND we get some Twiluna clop to boot in later chapters. KEEP UPDATING!
..please?
Well, that was an interesting premise. Looking forward to see what you do with it.
Simply yes, feed the legion your wonderful story.
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As I said before, don't worry. I have no plans to stop updating.
1886182 1886963 Personally, I often remember specific details of "the past" (which never actually happened) in my dreams. They don't stick around once I've awoken, nor do most of my dreams, but when I wake, I occasionally recall remembering something I once "did" in my dream. Since this followed Twilight actually experiencing her dream, I find it completely plausible that she would remember something like that. (But I've found that my dreams are often very different from others'.)
Excellent. There can never be enough Twiluna fanfics.
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Oh, looks like I'm outnumbered!
That's very interesting. I personally don't dream very much (or maybe I just don't remember doing so?) so I base much of what I think of as "normal" for dreams from others' descriptions, and I've always heard people talk about how you can never remember anything that happened before your dream in a dream. (It was definitely a thing in Inception! Hell, even in this very story twilight realizes this at some point.) But of course different people will dream in different ways. It was silly of me to think everyone would be the same... Thanks for enlightening me!
I'm curious to see where this goes.
A well written take on the concept.
Lets see where this goes.
Very nice indeed
I am anxious to hear more.
I liked the way you captured Twilight's thirst for knowledge, you made the characters very realistic and believable and I'm curious as to see where you're going with this.
Please find attached five moustaches
I absolutely love this story, but when I see the story name, all I can think of is Trivium.
IN WAAAAAAAAAAAVES!!
Typical clop fic shit. Blah Blah Blah horse sex. The End. This is supposed to be good reading?
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Er, what? If you took the time to read the chapter, you would see that there isn't any sex so far whatsoever, and that 'The End' won't be here for a while. I'm sorry if you disliked the story, but I would like if you had any reasons besides an inherent bias that, in this case, isn't even relevant.
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I did read the chapter thank you. But therein lies the problem. It's a convoluted and drawn out set up but the end result is still just clop fic tripe. There is a much older twi/luna fic that has this same premise but is done without the eventual point being the sex, but rather their relationship as it develops. I mean you can say whatever you want to but we all know in our heart of hearts that the point of this is cartoon horse sex. I find this objectionable.
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If it's so objectionable, then why did you bother reading it and take the time to comment, instead of downvoting (which I see you have) and moving on?
Such soft and silken words Thank you so much...
This eloquent and delectable narrative was just wonderful.
I must favorite. Again, thank you.
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Ignoring something is tantamount to implicit approval. Expressing displeasure is the only way to have it be noticed, lest it fall with apathy and silent approval.
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Because it's at the top of the feature box here so I read it first as I plan to read other stories and also comment on them. I am commenting because I have feelings on what I read which I have shared, it's called feedback from readers, and it won't always be positive.
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horse butts.