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GoG ToXiC
RCAF pilot in training. Returning to the fandom (in a fashion) and probably going to start writing again once I've caught up with the show.
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Note to my readers: Writing Clop scenes on school library computers leads to some VERY awkward teacher/student conversations. Just a heads up.
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Great story Toxic. I'm looking forward to more.
2137149 Yes I can see how that would cause issues.....
Wonderful story. Keep writing the good stuff.
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CosmicUnicorn is an amazing artist. He's got plenty of other awesome Twiluna art in his gallery if you want to check it out
2137445 Well this was originally planned as a standalone, but there's definitely room for some other stories in the continuity. I guess we'll see where things go...
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Fortunately, the librarian likes me.
Thanks to all of you who have taken the time to read the story so far. Your support means the world!
Moonclop.
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that's pretty funny
2137149 I can imagine the teacher was all like ಠ_ಠ and you were all like ๏_๏... that would be so awkward.
2137149 Lol, still enjoyed this! Nice job at school. I wouldn't have that kind of courage
2137955 I liked the idea
2138389 It's not courage my friend. It's stupidity. I knew that the school system was set up to monitor every single screen, yet I did it anyway XD
2138172 Pretty accurate depiction.
2137968 At the time, awkward. But looking back? Funny as hell
Thank you everypony! This story has already done better then I could have hoped and we're only a couple hours in.
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I've written a clop and had clop on my computer when a teacher walked by... Quite akward when I'm trying to get Celestia's plot a lot of attention.
Nice and romantic, good job.
"It'll take more THAN Prince Blueblood" ^^ just a minor spelling error I caught^^
Also, VERY nice story you have produced here^^ I really like the change that happened to the moon after they went to sleep^^ great work^^
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Aren't those awkward situations just the best?
I happen to not have learned my lesson either, so I imagine there will be plenty more in the future XD
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Thank you!
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Thank's for pointing that out! I'll fix it right away!
2139049 hello^^ may I ask where you got your avatar?^^ it loooks awesome^^
2141778 you're very welcome^^
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I seriously dont know I got it about 2 months back
2142519 aww damn... I want to have the pic but I cant find it on the net so I hoped you'd still remember... oh well cant have everything^^ Thanks for answering^^
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Here you go!
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EEEEEEUGGGGHHHHHH!
2145537I'm... not sure what this is supposed to be?
2143181 Awesome! Thanks man^^
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Supposed to be this.
2149392 Nope, it's supposed to sound like EWWWWWWWW, AND UGHHHH.
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Well then I'll assume that you disliked the story for no other reason then the subject matter wasn't something you agreed with, and ignore you as such. I don't care if you hate clop, or twiluna, or whatever. Everybody is entitled to their own opinion. But if you're not going to provide any sort of valid criticism then there's really no point for you to be here. You're just wasting time; mine and yours both.
Author thinks i'm pathetic enough to downvote a story just because I disagree with it.
now i must say this.... EPIC STORY!!!!!!! dude, not many stories please me.... my favorite list is long because i have read 234(now 235) stories and counting, this one is going on the fav list! TUNA FTW! (Tuna is Twiluna, just in case...) now i must request more clop from you!
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I made the assumption since you can't seem to be bothered to actually explain your opinion. Maybe there's some deep hidden meaning within your comments that I'm missing, but I can't see it. As it stands, you're coming across as either lazy or a troll, and I don't really care for either.
2174762 No, I do this to every friggin' story I find, I leave behind a comment, and if I disagree with the topic of the story, i'll leave a comment that expresses distaste in it. Especially since it's a clop story with lesbians, ALL THE SAME, MEN PUT TWO GIRLS TOGETHER AND WANT 'EM TO PERFORM FOR THEIR OWN SEXUAL GRATIFICATION. Such is the path to Hell! Repent, the end is nigh!
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Hmm...
Ignoring the interesting connections between those two comments, I'll just address the second one.
"ALL THE SAME, MEN PUT TWO GIRLS TOGETHER AND WANT 'EM TO PERFORM FOR THEIR OWN SEXUAL GRATIFICATION"
Frankly, that insults me. That was never the purpose of this fiction. Sex is the penultimate act of a romance, and I don't see any issues with using it as such. If you don't like clop, that's fine. If you have something against homosexuality, that's fine too. But don't you dare come to my story page, and make the assumption that my writing is for no purpose other then sexual gratification. Sex is sex, and provided there is consent from both parties, it's a beautiful thing.
"Such is the path to Hell!"
I'm not even going to treat this seriously... If god wants to condemn me because of 3500 words of sexually explicit material, then Hell must be a pretty damn crowded location, and probably not all that bad.
"Repent, the end is night!"
Yeah... no.
@GoG ToXiC
Exactly, love is a sacred thing and it transcends gender. And I agree with your view on romance / sex. All in all this was a cute and enjoyable story. You get 2 thumbs up.
That... Was... AWESOME!!!
Keep up the amazing work, you're a great writer. The clop was good, but the story itself was even better. So heartfelt. It takes a really good writer to balance the two.
a little fast but I understand you can't really put much into three thousand words, so cheers.
What happens on the moon...
Its a short, but well done and enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing!
I don't think I've ever seen a Twiluna fic where Twilight's a manipulate bitch trying to gain political power. Damn it, now I want to.
Really, this is a very well written story. Like LeoValkenhein said, this story balances out the sex to romance ratio. Too much of either gets a bit dull at times. You deserve a thumbs up, a favorite for this story, and a follower.
That marks the exact moment I went from 'this is actually kind of cute'
to 'sweet mother of whatever deity happens to actually exist this escalated quickly'
...I like it
I've read this story a million times and loved it every time so keep up the good work
Go ahead and pretend like you saw nothing, Celestia. I just hope you remember to sweep up all the popcorn kernels off the floor.
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... Is shared with the sun goddess
she can say she saw nothing, but we all know she watched!
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now i know not to attempt a clop on a school computer, thanks! prob will forget and do it anyhow, but thanks for the warning even if it was just in general!
How beautiful.
One of the best Twilight clops I've read.
A nice little piece, though no force in this world or most others - leaving an exception for only Tia, Twi or Luna herself - will make me believe that Celly didn't saw anything of what was going on up there...
Looking up at the moon and not spying what was going on? Probably achieved by the power of convenience...? Nahhh. Tia's just awkward and strange and a little bit weird again - though that's not a problem at all and nothing bad.
Thank you.
I give you kudos.
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Well said.
If you're gonna compound on why you think there's something wrong with a story, at least come up with a more compelling reason than 'lesbian romance is wrong.'
Luna is quite flexible if her muzzle can reach near her own crotch, since their neither lips are pressed close while she nibbles Twi's nipple. And the horn! People never think of the horn on the head! Well, I saw one fic that did but it is rare.
You also get hit pretty hard with "lavander unicorn syndrome", where you avoid using a character's name and instead some sort of description. This isn't that big of a deal if used in moderation but it is a over used here.
Still, a fun and enjoyable read. Keep up the good work, and by that I mean both the writing and the shipping of lesbian ponies.
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LUS was a huge problem for me back when I wrote this. At the time I was heavily entrenched in the mentality that using every possible combination of adjectives and nouns made the writing more diverse and interesting, but I've (fortunately) since moved away from that, and been forcing myself to stick with predominately names and simple pronouns, with the occasional LUS tossed in a couple times to mix things up.
Glad you enjoyed, and I do hope you'll find my other work (both currently published and upcoming) quite enjoyable as well if you choose to read it.
Appreciate the criticism as well, I should add.