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sniper125


Part-time writer; Full-time lover

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Nice. Adding this to my fav list as I love Twiluna. I caught some things so I hope you don't mind me pointing them out.

Normally she would lay down on her balcony and peer for her telescope for hours on end, but tonight the setting of her viewing had to be changed.

Uhm... might want to replace that with either up or through.

Twilight had rushed immediately to the train station and arrived at the gardens outside Canterlot Castle just as the some had touched the horizon.

Sun rather than some.

Twilight stood up and looked to Luna quizzically.'

Unneeded punctuation mark.

But me visiting Ponyville my cause a bit of a stir so I hoped you could be the one to visit.

May.

huh. ok twiluna is in fact best so i think..... yeah. ill watch this.

3238189 Thanks a lot for the notes! I'll fix them immeditately! :twilightsmile:

Edit: Done! Thank you again!

3237938:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: I'm glad you like it!

3238247 I hope you enjoyed this and I hope you'll enjoy the next part!

Yeah, okay, you caught me in my guilty need for Twilight ship fics. :ajsleepy:

I like I really do but I just wish that all Luna shipping didn't start out with said pony comments on how much they love the night. What I want to see is where Luna finds someone who is afraid of the night and she becomes determined to show them that the night is not to be feared. And then over time they both began to feel for each other. That would be totally original.

But that being said, I'm a huge fan of Luna and Twilight so thumbs up, faced and followed.

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Thank you for the comment! I totally understand your point with the whole development of relationships with Luna. I really like your idea but I feel a full series is more appropriate for that type of story. I do think it's a great idea though so maybe that will be my next full series! :twilightsmile:

Please! I need more! Just finished the show, I have pony withdrawal! Please, I'm going to die if i can't get my Twiluna fix!

3289466 I am now 3/4's done! :twilightsmile: School has kept me from my writing but nopefully I can finish tonight! :twilightsheepish:

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AAGgggg.... where my beautiful Twiluna? Don't mean to pester, but please? I gotta get my fix, man.

Absolutely loved it, but i figured i might let you know it's still marked 'everyone' as of right now.

Yea, little warning on the mature woulda been nice. Luckily I'm not somewhere crowded with people starring over my shoulder.

Might want to change that everybody sign :rainbowlaugh:

Nonetheless another enjoyable TwiLuna part. Can never have enough good TwiLuna.

3328520 well he gave A warning he just didn't follow up on it.He said this chapter hewould change it to mature.... he failed to do so.

you got this marked as Everyone

SHL

I liked! Great confession at the end... And a cliffhanger, daaaaamn!!! :flutterrage:

twiluna is by a lage margin best and this was damned adorable.

3328900 3328537 3328500 3328520OH MY GOD THANK YOU SO MUCH! I published this during study hall at the very last moment and forgot to change the rating! :facehoof: I hope I haven't scarred anyone! xD Anyways, thank you all for reminding me and also thank you for the compliments! Also, I am planning on a sort of Chapter 2.5 thing since I ended on a cliffhanger like that :twilightsheepish:

Thanks again!

Quick Question for you all: I have this old version of the story that my friend and I TOTALLY botched up like it just turns to pure insanity and he wanted me to post that "alternate" chapter as well. Should I add it to here as a bonus or just make it into a blog post? :twilightoops:

3353917 u should add as a new story. ^_^

3536265 hmmm i might do that except it isn't that long and it is just complete and utter nonsense :rainbowwild:

3536959 So! I've read several one shots like that...thay are usally the most entertaining to read.

I'm kinda suprised actually. Luna seemed more eager to finally GIVE it to somepony again rather than recieving it, I guess everyone would understand her for giving in to that urge after 1000 years of isolation. But nope. She just wants to make others happy.... This is why I love Luna^^

I think you could go farther with this if you wanted

3764458 I'm currently looking for inspiration for a new short story, I'm looking to stop with the whole series business for now but the chance of a two-chapter sequel is on the table right now.

looks like cover traces to http://fav.me/d37x352 . May want to ask the artist if that's his art, just to be sure.

I couldn't help but laugh a at Luna's not very subtle advances

I don't know what this is, I don't know why I read it, but I like it.

4789285 basically my friend and I were sitting in Government last fall and I was writing in the notebook when I went to turn in an assignment. I came back and he just smiled and pointed at his "correction". I literally just thought "screw it" and this is what happened :rainbowlaugh:

4789186 Glad I made some people laugh :ajsmug:

My original plan was to post this a few months ago but I just noticed I never did :twilightblush:

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4789857 Well then xD I'm glad you liked it :moustache:

4973848 there is a sequel out right now! :twilightsmile:

Love it! So calm, and peaceful...:twilightsmile:

Well that escalated quickly. It was hilarious though. And TwiLuna is always a winner :twilightsmile:

5522962 I know right

I wish I was able to stay awake. Unfortunately I have to go to sleep. Goodnight everyone

It was strange for Twilight at first, she had never written a letter to even her own teacher that didn’t have some type of purpose that served the kingdom. But she soon found herself sending and receiving numerous letters that followed the lines of how either mare’s weekend went, what they’re plans were for that week, or even just random gossip that Twilight had heard from her friend Rarity.

I would say that friendship lessons aren't that big a deal in the grand scheme of things, but I've seen what the power of friendship can do, I.E. defeat villains with rainbows.

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