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Wodahseht


I've been crazy all my life, it's kept me from going insane.


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Alright. That was very cute.

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:twilightblush:

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Heart attacks are good... so long as you survive... I need my readers to be around for the next thing I put out. :derpytongue2:

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I'm glad you enjoyed. :pinkiesmile:

I think you might be being a little hard on yourself. While this may not be a mind-blowing piece of literature, it's still a fun read. the dialog was well-written, the behavior of the characters was in-character (that was a bit repetitive, but I think you get my drift), and the descriptions of their activities was pretty on-point. It was vague enough to allow the readers' imaginations to fill in some blanks and yet specific enough to entertain without being crass.

Long story review short, I liked it, keep up the good work.

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I appreciate the support.

And I wasn't saying it's a bad story, but it's not what I want. It's a common thing among artists/writers as far as I can tell: You have this image or story in your mind and you try to give it physical form. But no matter how hard you try you can't get it to match exactly with what it is in your head. And it's frustrating. And it'd be so easy to just call yourself a failure because you can't ever get it right.

It's even worse with the fact I have a minor case of OCD and if something isn't done right I feel I need to redo it until it is. And when my art/writing doesn't match the mental picture exactly then it isn't right. And knowing that all I can do is get close and that I can never quite make it right bugs the crap out of me...

*Deep breath*

Anyway, micro-rant out of the way: I know it's not bad, it just isn't everything I was aiming for. Either way, I'm glad people like it and thanks for taking the time to comment. :twilightsmile:

The imagery was fantastic, the scenes touching and sensual simultaneously. Now... the orgasm descriptions may have waxed poetic a tad far, but honestly I think it was part of the charm.

Very enjoyable piece! I can't say I read it before the re-write, but it was certainly very good in this incarnation.

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Now... the orgasm descriptions may have waxed poetic a tad far, but honestly I think it was part of the charm.

Yeah... clop just isn't my thing. The only way I could make myself do it was as a relationship exploration with sex - rather than sex in a relationship. I'll leave serious clop to those more skilled in it. :twilightblush:

Anyway, glad you enjoyed. :twilightsmile:

Very nice. They felt totally in character and it was a fun read.

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Glad you enjoyed. And happy to hear they felt in character. My biggest worry in writing fanfiction is always that I'll not portray the characters properly as themselves. Dodged that bullet here I guess. :pinkiehappy:

:twilightsmile:I must say that the photo cover art had me on the ground laughing the look on Twilight's face was just too good to pass up this story thus I shall add it to my favorites. :twilightsmile:

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Glad you liked the image. Had it commissioned from DfectiveDvice because I wanted that sort of reaction. :pinkiehappy:

7516120 Well it worked this was a wonderful photo and I am looking forward to reading your work. :twilightsmile:

Very nice! Great job setting this up visually :scootangel:

Very nice chapter! Twilight Top is always a good scenario. :twilightsmile:

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But no matter how hard you try you can't get it to match exactly with what it is in your head. And it's frustrating. And it'd be so easy to just call yourself a failure because you can't ever get it right.
It's even worse with the fact I have a minor case of OCD and if something isn't done right I feel I need to redo it until it is. And when my art/writing doesn't match the mental picture exactly then it isn't right. And knowing that all I can do is get close and that I can never quite make it right bugs the crap out of me

Amen to that, brother!!! I have scrapped so many stories for that exact reason!!!!

Also, I love that picture at the end

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I think most creators could empathize. And glad you like the art, go love on the artist. :derpytongue2:

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