Birthday Surprise

MBirthday Surprise II: Of Whipped Cream and other delicious Treats
MLP: FiM
Romance
Luna's birthday was a great success, but now it's Twilight's, and Luna wants to make this one unforgettable for the pony she loves more than anything else. What ideas will she have to try and top the young alicorn’s?
Sex
Twilight
Luna
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jdhog77

jdhog77 #1 · May 3rd, 2015 · 7 · ·

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

VitalSpark

VitalSpark #2 · May 3rd, 2015 · 9 · ·

5935868 It does rather beg for a sequel, doesn't it?

Anabiosis7

Anabiosis7 #3 · May 4th, 2015 · 3 · 1 ·

Whipped cream, yummy! Hot, naughty pony-lesbians, covered in whipped cream and lick it from each other, I love it! Didn't expected cream play with Luna and Twilight. I always think that Celestia into it. Anyway, Twilight gave Luna a best birthday present ever. Will be there a sequel? Mabe with threesome? You already know that I am a big fan of twilunestia. More whipped cream, more cute cream play!

Harmony Split

Harmony Split #4 · May 4th, 2015 · 3 · ·

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Since ya all are asking that nice.
Yes, there will be more at some later time.
Sadly, I'm not really into that threesome pairing.
I'm more strictly onto the TwiLuna Rail.
Expect Twilight's Birthday somewhere end this month/next month

lillytheomegawolf

lillytheomegawolf #5 · Sep 5th, 2015 · · ·

I could do more TwiLuna like this... As long as you keep it just between the two of them.

PHR

PHR #6 · Sep 5th, 2015 · · ·

To be honest, I didn't expect a quality story and quality clop squeezed into less than 4000 words.

On the other hand, a box of Nestle Smarties is likewise evanescent, but delicious and memorable — just like this story.

Well done, Scratch. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Dakingace

Dakingace #7 · Sep 14th, 2015 · · ·

lol .

Comment posted by Melody Knight Shadow deleted Dec 1st, 2015

Harmony Split

Harmony Split #9 · Nov 30th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Seriously, what the Buck is wrong with you?
Your comment is unneeded and I don't care if you hate me.
I write what I want and like

Melody Knight Shadow

Melody Knight Shadow #10 · Dec 1st, 2015 · · ·

6684821 I am sorry that was a dick move of me and I hope you can figure me for my Rude comment I fell like a jack ass for that comment please for give me so ya if you can forgive me that would be great and again I am really sorry