Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving
Inspired by the day and night court, Celestia suggests that Twilight opens her own court, giving everypony the ability to reach her with their problems and requests. Twilight doesn’t know what to think of it, but she soon will. Too soon, she sees that things seldom go as expected, and she finds herself hiding in her own nightmare.
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Not a bad little story.
7054037
Thank you
10/10
More in-depth review to come
7054044
Feel free to but as I said, this is only a quick work, my own thoughts rewritten into a story.
Writing time was barely an hour
All the way through until the kiss the story simply felt like Slice of Life, not an ounce of romance. And even when romance did appear, it felt a bit awkward, or forced. I think the story would have done better without it.
(But I totally ship it)
7054065
Thank you for your honest opinion.
It is just a short work, but I'm totally on the TwiLuna rail atm^^
Maybe there will be more at some later time
You're such a little devil, you trickster. Trapping me into doing work for you. For shaaaame!
Well, it turned out fair enough, though. You know I'm going to have to get you back for this.
7054121
I love you too
We should really get back to Moonlight at some time, y'know?
7054121
Wait I forgot something...
ES IST SO FLAUSCHIG!
yay i already read it because i edited it
7054172
Yep, thanks
7054048 Twi-Luna is love
Twi-luna is life
I don't care if it was fast XD or to slow down XP I just wanted something quick to read c; and it was. Good ;;Pp
i like this story.
This scream for a sequel.
7054135
Oui! Je suis duveteux! Mais, je ne suis pas fou comme toi!
7054597
Non, nous sommes tous les deux vous bat poné fous moelleux
7054604
Wir sind der Fluch der Vernunft.
7054625
Das kannst du laut sagen.
Ich glaub alle anderen denken schon wir sind komplett gaga
7054541
7054575
Thankies
Was sehe ich denn da ihr 2 seit da deutsche (Oder könnt zumindest deutsch schreiben) omg
wird ja immer besser hier 
7054668
Ich ja.
Sie? Sie ist ein flauschiger mischling
7054466 in your dreams Octascratch is love Octascratch is life bra
>>JJSlay
7054668 Ach für das Stammland
But-but... That was the only complaint I had. Now what will I whine about?
word
Haha! Their relationship began in Tartarus! That's a story to tell her parents.
Ok. Now I see what you meant by rushed. But it's ok nevertheless.
7055952
The weather?
Na, you are free to give me your honest opinion, I just know myself that this is short and rushed, so I mostly dc about those comments
7056060
Well, way to go, huh?
7056062
Thanks!
Not bad... but not particularly interesting either...
But it's written, and that's what counts, really.
So...you mostly Detective Comics about these comments? How does that work!?
Ok I wasn't expecting that.
7055952 Haha
7056818
The magix
More TwiLuna is always a good thing. Rushed, but when you have the urge to write, there isn't always time to make every fic an epic, is there?
pressed her lips against...against what? Assume it's supposed to be "against hers".
afraid it would work, or afraid it wouldn't work? Should be the latter if Luna's talking about ascension to alicorn-hood.
7057048
First is right, thanks.
Second, it is quite correct.
With working, she meant the relation at all, coming closer to Twilight.
One of the best ones on the features board I've seen this month.
7059090
Thank you
defiantly a nice little story, one that seems to hold potential to become more like a re-write purahps or maybe something as simple as a gateway of sorts into one-shot Drabbles of thier time together
7064102
To be honest, I never expected this to become popular in any way.
It was meant to be a little story, written by my thoughts, not more than a unimportant one-shot.
Seeing this reach so far, leads me to more than my usual expectations in this community.
Maybe not all is lost for small writers like me
Awesome story!!!
I like it.
7070731
My goodness, yes! More of this ship would be most graciously appreciated, especially from your talented hooves!
I really liked this story, as short as it may be, it is sweet. bravo :)
You can has review!