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Harmony Split


Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving

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Sometimes, even hundreds of years can't change how you feel.
Twilight notices this every week.
Will she get over the tears of the past?

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Thanks to Twidashforever for his help on this
Edited by DonnEStarside
Cover art by Adalbertus

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

Wow, that was simply beautiful. So heartfelt and I'm now crying.

5807250

Thank you:twilightsmile:
It wasn't really easy to write^^

Wow. Impressive. I stand by what I said when I called you one of the most impressive writers I've ever worked with.

5807416

Thank you!
And I stay with my comment about you being one of the most impressive editors :raritywink:

Touching, truly touching. :fluttercry: I don't recall the last fanfiction that legitimately brought me to tears, although after this, I don't think I'll forget for a good while. Writing with that much emotion, it's a talent. Please, continue to cultivate that talent, and continue writing beautiful stories like this. :raritywink:

5809748

Thank you kindly for your feedback. :twilightsmile:
It's actually the first story of it's kind that I wrote.
But after all the good words and feedback I got, I think I will write more of those in the future.

First fic to make me cry very heartfelt very beautiful I just don't have the words. :raritydespair: very very well written I love how you used the throne room and map from season 5 info :rainbowkiss:

5810698

Thanks.
Yeah, got a bit inspiration^^
You weren't the only one who cried.
I lost one proofreader on his story, may he rest in tears :facehoof:

5810817

I crawled my way back from the grave of tears!

Still, even after everything, it was worth it.

This story truly is a gem! :raritystarry:

I hate and love you for this story. It just breaks my heart, but it does it in a way that makes me want to break it again and again so that i can feel just half of the sweet, sweet pain twilight endures. Have all my thanks for this wonderful piece of writing.:raritycry::fluttercry::twilightsmile:

5830279

Thanks!
Hating myself a bit for this, but I just had to write it down.
Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

I love this story!!! the feels are so genuine. the pain does diminish after time, but the memories live on. thank you for the tremendous feels you brought out. you are truly gifted as a writer. Ive always wondered why so much of our deepest emotional selves seem to be brought out in fiction rather than in reality.

5847806

Thank you
Sometimes the fiction is not that far away from the reality...

Congrats, a story jabbed me in the heart repeatedly for the first time in a long time.

Goddamn you, author. Now I cannot stop crying. This story...has to be some of the best material I have read on this site in a while. Seeing Twilight recollect the memories of Rainbow Dash really did it for me. Kudos for writing this masterpiece.

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5854021

Thanks, I stabbed my own with it at some points.


5858716

Well, it was pretty hard to write, so thank you.
Another story (kind of) similar to this is already in the made, since tragedy seems to be my strong side connected with romance.

It's so beautiful. But short on chapters although it is also well done.... The moments on Twilight and Luna OMG that is like the best moments I ever seen where Princess Luna loves Princess Twilight.

i think this fic was worth getting slightly depressed for! :pinkiesad2:

Made me cry as much as My Little Dashie. Actually, that's none, but you know what I mean. I definitely felt like I was about to. Have a like and fav.

Twilight waking up: Damnit, Rainbow's dead.

Body next to Twilight: Oh! Yay, she's not dead! No wait, that's Luna. Well, probably won't feel sorrow then.

Gravestones:

Rarity: okay.

Fluttershy: Oh no.

Pinkie: Eh heh heh.

Applejack: No, Rainbow's next and she probably was married to Twilight before.

Rainbow: Ah hah hah! I knew it!

Oh, buck it, where's my pillow for crying in...?:raritycry:
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Beautiful one, really loved it, thought came her for pure TwiDash (only myself to blame, huh):pinkiesmile:
Best of luck:twilightsmile:

This story is awesome. It just makes me cry everytime I read it.

5859103 damn you...damn you to Tartarus for doing this to me...i cant stop my tears...you've successfully took my heart and tore off a good chunk then gave it back

very good story, so many feels, so many tears.....

*goes back to crying in a corner*

Its official. This is the first fanfic to bring me to tears :fluttercry::applecry::raritycry::fluttershbad::ajsleepy::raritycry:

Um, just a suggestion; do away with the tragedy tag. It's not necessary, and can actually push people away from what is just a really sad fic.

The only way this would be a tragedy is if Twilight committed suicide as a result of her friends being gone. Myself, personally, there are precious few fics that have that tag that I actually like; the vast majority are poorly written slash fiction.

I'll give a like and favorite though, because this is a truly wonderful sad tale.

*sniffle* oh my god what Have you done to my face?

I'm all wet and gross now. *sniffle*

This is the first fanfiction to actually make me cry.:fluttercry:
Beautiful job.

The concept of immorality has always terrified me. Even though I know i never would be the concept is terrifying. This fic outlines exactly why it is soo terrifying.
This fic is soo Beautiful and has made me soo super sad.

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