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Wodahseht


I've been crazy all my life, it's kept me from going insane.

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"Daring Do" has been captured by the dreaded "Ahuizotl" in a lava-filled chamber. Can she rescue herself and find him in time to save her friend and end his evil schemes? Let's find out.

Filly Twilight

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Moar! Moar, please! Before I die of laughter! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I could very easily see this sort of thing happening between Shining Armor, Cadence, and filly Twilight. :rainbowlaugh:

Twilight is so freaking cute!:rainbowkiss:

I can imagine this happening. Shining probably makes her blush anytime he would say "Dawing Do to the Wescue!"

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Yeah, this felt like such a natural thing to happen that it barely took me 30 minutes to write when I finally sat down and did it this morning.

Shining probably makes her blush anytime he would say "Dawing Do to the Wescue!"

Only in company. :derpytongue2:

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We'll see. This was fun enough to write that I might do more one-shots on the theme in the future. No promises though as my muse is fickle.

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...and another gif for my collection. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:


Glad you all enjoyed. :twilightsmile:

Dawing Do AWWAYS TWIUMPHS!

So she can say "Ahuizotl" just fine, but "rescue" is beyond her? Yup, that's Twilight! :rainbowlaugh:

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Just trouble with R's is all. Not her fault biology hasn't caught up with her brain. :derpytongue2:

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Quite so. :twilightsmile: (Really need a pony with monocle emoticon...)

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Hah, more reaction images, nice. Glad you enjoyed.

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Liked and faved just on principle. Reading it now.

EDIT: .... MOAR CUETNESS!!!!!!!!!!!

Urgh. Too...Cute...Can't...Look...Directly....At her! DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW- *Passes into cuteness coma*

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Loving the responses to this story. Thanks for popping in!

Oh my Celestia. I love this. Super cute and hilarious. And the ending. After reading that I think, "And thus, Shining learned that he would never stand a chance against his future wife, or his sister." Poor dude, but that's what he gets.

I just keep cracking up every time I imagine a filly Twilight diving at Shinning with that adorable battle cry.

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I just keep cracking up every time I imagine a filly Twilight diving at Shinning with that adorable battle cry.

That battle cry inspired the entire story. :pinkiehappy: Thanks for stopping in. :twilightsmile:

This was absolutely adorable. However, I do have one tiny, minor quibble.

she inched her way along - hindered by her forelegs still trapped and hindered by need to protect her wings from additional injury.

"You just don't want to-"

These hyphens should be Em Dashes (—). The em dash is easy to make just hold down the Alt key and type 0151 using the numerical keypad. Or, conversely, copy and paste the one provided.

I will add the to my favorites and like it, too.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

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I'm taking your word on the dashes and updating them. I really don't know the rules on dashes so I try to limit their use when I write. Glad you enjoyed it in any case.

This is truly glorious.

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He's right, though from what I can tell it's becoming popular to not be as much of a stickler about them.

I've got a punctuation guide here though if you'd like to read up on it yourself. ^^

Augh!! The cute! It's too much!!

Very cute and hilarious. The story reminds me of "The Battle of Fort Book". :heart: :twilightsmile:

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Thanks. I could probably learn the rules fairly easily, but it really hasn't been important to me as writing is just a sort of side-hobby. Stuff I've put up has been just dumping ideas out of my head or to practice depicting certain interactions rather than me trying to learn better grammar. That said...considering how much more attention my stuff has gotten than I expected, I should probably try to give more attention to the grammar.

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Haven't read that one yet. I'll have to take a peak when I get back from visiting family for the weekend.

Cute, adorable, hilarious.
'Nuff said.

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And based on one of my nieces. :scootangel:

6202942 Oho, I'd love to hear the real deal...
But I won't pry if that's a private/family story.

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Mostly the same story, with brother and his wife instead of Shining and Cadance, and niece was Starfire from Teen Titans instead of Daring Do. Forget what villain she declared my brother to be. (I wasn't actually there when it happened.)

6203900 Ohmygosh, that sounds even more adorable than this!

Heh. Nice. I'd searched for 'lava' before I did 'The Floor is Lava', but this one never came up. We were definitely barking up the same tree. Cute stuff! :pinkiehappy:

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