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Ebon Mane


Not all ponies prefer the day to the night. Twilight and Luna are creatures of the night, and for ponies like them, love is best found under starlight.

Note: This fic is terrible and only kept for historical purposes. It is vapid and poorly written. It was the first fanfic I ever wrote, back on Valentine's Day of 2011. Humble beginnings and all that.

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More TwiLuna por favor.

Sigh, great work, as always. Nothing tops TwiLuna. Thanks again!

#5 · Sep 26th, 2011 · · ·

esta estoria es estupendo sorry i write or speak spanish when i'm joy full :twilightblush:

:pinkiesad2: That's sweet.

Awwww, that was so sweet, and it really funny to think of Luna as a babbling air head! LOL thank you for writing this


not even close to be logical (meh) not my favorite, but still a gapfiller

Yeah! More Twiluna, I'll download it right now.

If you want to improve your spanish, it's "estupenda" (feminine) not "estupendo" (masculine). And it's "historia" not "estoria" (which is feminine). I hope I helped you, even a little. (I'm not good at english neither, so correct me if it's necessary!)

I've just finished it, and it's quite nice. But here are some tips:
Try to not rush so much. A well-written shippfic is based on a side story that makes the two main characters meet. Also, you cannot simply make they meet in a so randomly way. It needs to have some logic. They cannot fall in love with each other so easly.
Just that, your writting style is perfect, and the idea fits a good Twiluna (twilight's love for stargazing, Luna been lonely, etc). Just try to expand that idea, and you'll get an awesome Twiluna shippfic! Even if you want, I can be your pre-reader! In fact, I'd be glad. :twilightsmile:


This was the first fanfiction I wrote, back in February of 2011. It's a bit of an old shame, and I know that it's full of flaws. I've learned a lot since I wrote it, about many aspects of storytelling. My most recent shipping work is Merely a Mare, which I think you'd find to be a significant improvement, even if it's not finished quite yet.

This was alright for a terrible story.

Author Interviewer

Yeah, okay, that was pretty... not great... <.< Sorry.


PP, why are you reading all my old, terrible shit? No one should ever be subjected to Creatures of the Night.

Author Interviewer

Realized I wasn't watching you.

Implemented standard watching procedure, i.e., to-read all fics.

Had a chance to read, tend to read stuff under 2k. :B Hence this.

Love This TwiLuna Rules

Simply Beautiful.

Yeah, I have to agree with you on this one. To be honest, I read it because I was curious, having very much enjoyed Tired, what your first fic was like. I've read plenty worse, but I can't say I enjoyed it, largely because I couldn't believe Twilight's characterisation. (Or Luna's, but more so Twi's.) So I have to downvote it. I don't imagine I'll ever do that again to one of your fics, though. :twilightsmile:


I wrote a lot of terrible things before I got the hang of this writing stuff.

Hey can you add this too my group Twiluna rocks?

Omg that made me cry happy tears loved it :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

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