• Published 30th Dec 2012
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Against the Wind - Shakespearicles



After the events of 'Magic Duel', Trixie reconsiders life on the road when she realizes her real reason for returning to Ponyville.

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Epilogue

Prologue actually.

It was late at night. So late it was early, the wee hours of the morning. In the maternity ward, it was the usual, hectic flurry of action and movement. Ponies in the waiting room waited patiently for news about the new mothers and their foals. For some, they were their spouse, or very special somepony. There were also family members. Brothers, sisters, mothers and fathers waiting for their daughter. Among them was a very nervous Mr. Sparkle.

The doctor came out of the delivery theater. "Mr. Sparkle?"

Mr. Sparkle was shaken from his anxious thoughts at the call of his name. "Yes, that's me!" he called out, standing from his seat on the bench. He trotted over to the doctor. The doc took him aside quickly.

"Mr. Sparkle, I'm afraid there has been a complication with the delivery." he explained.

"Oh my gosh, oh no!" Sparkle began to break down.

"Don't worry, the mother is doing fine, but we're going to have to do a C section for the delivery. She's being prepped as we speak and is already under anesthesia. But since she is unconscious, I just need your consent to proceed." he said.

"Yes, of course! You have it!" Sparkle blurted, wishing the doctor luck. The doctor nodded before vanishing back behind the doors

"Scrubs!" Sparkle heard from behind the doors. With nothing more he could do, he resigned himself back to his seat in the waiting room. To wait. The waiting was the hardest part.
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An eternity later, a nurse called Mr. Sparkle back into the delivery ward. Inside, he saw the doctor just finishing getting out of his surgical wear. "Mr. Sparkle," he waved him over, "please, come here." he walked over. "I'm afraid I have some bad news..."

"Oh no!"

"The mother is fine. She'll recover from the anesthesia soon. As for the foals-"

"Foals?"

"Yes she was pregnant with fraternal, that is, not identical, twins. Unfortunately... only one made it, I'm afraid... Had you decided on the name?" He and his wife could never agree on a name. She wanted to name their daughter Twilight. She was still unconscious. It would be unfair to choose otherwise without her.

"Twilight. Twilight Sparkle." he answered.

"Very well." the doc said, filling in the birth certificate. "Now, there's just the matter of..." the doctors voice trailed off as he passed to Mr. Sparkle, a small box. The size of a baby foal. He placed it gently in his hooves. Sparkle clutched it tight and wept silently. "I'm so sorry for your loss sir. Please, do as you see fit." The doctor said, leaving Mr. Sparkle with the box in the recovery room.

He placed the box on the small hospital table, unable to bear to look inside yet. He moved to the side of his wife's bed. Baby Twilight was sleeping peacefully in the nearby bassinet. He knelt down and kissed each of them in their sleep. He counted his blessings to have them both with him still. He turned back to the small box on the bedside table. He looked inside now. The small, powder blue foal was wrapped in linen. She looked as though sleeping. It was only the lack of the rising and falling of her tiny chest that he could tell she was...

He set his jaw as his sorrow crystallized into resolve. There was still time.

He whispered into his wife's ear. "Please forgive me." before he vanished with the box in a flash of purple light.
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Mr. Sparkle reappeared in the basement of his Canterlot home. He tore the carpet from the floor, revealing the silver arcane circle inlaid into the floor. Its ring was adorned with magical gems and carved with runes and sigils. He threw open his old trunk, emptying it onto the floor, retrieving an ancient tome, his old mage cape and hat.

He was once a mage for the royal court. But it was a part of his life he put behind himself for the sake of his wife. That was no life for her to be married to. He resigned to become a librarian. But, being the head curator of the Canterlot Archives, he had access to all the ancient spell books and scrolls.

Even the restricted ones.

He opened the old black book to the correct page and set it on the nearby reading stand. He placed the foals still form in the center of the circle. Everything was in place. "Celestia take mercy on my soul." he whispered.

He called forth his power to his horn, focusing on the spell. The circle's ring acted as a magical focus. This would be no simple automation 'come to life' spell. He was retrieving a very specific soul for this body. The soul of a forsaken baby foal that never was.

The ring glowed with the same brilliance as his horn as he finished shaping the spell. It flashed in a blinding white as the spell released with a *snap*! Sparkle fought back the worst headache of his life, hearing nothing but the sound of his own pounding heart and labored breathing. But then...

Whaaaa, aahhha waaaaa!

The baby foal in the circle cried out! She was alive! But she was a product of black magic. An abomination against nature in the eyes of magic law.

And she was beautiful, Mr. Sparkle decided.

Beautiful little Trixie. He moved to levitate her over to him. Suddenly he felt a shooting pain stab him in the forehead. It was as he feared... Dark magic, especially dark magic of this caliber, usually requires a sacrifice for success. In this case, he had sacrificed his ability to use magic to save his daughter's life. He mourned his personal loss only briefly. Little Trixie was alive and that was enough for him.

Suddenly, all his lack of planning came crashing down on him. Trixie had already been officially declared dead. If she was discovered, he would be tried for crimes against nature. And Trixie... poor innocent Trixie... She would be destroyed as a product of dark magic. He wouldn't stand for it.

But what to do. He didn't have much time. He threw his hat and cape to the floor and began to work. Little Trixie crawled over and began to play with his hat. He paused his frantic plan and took in the adorable sight. He grabbed for his camera and took a picture. It would very well be the only evidence he would ever have to remember her by, for both their sake.

Everything he did took two to three times longer than normal. He felt lost without his magic, fumbling about with his blunt, clumsy hooves. He gathered together a bassinet with a handle. He lined it with soft, warm linen, and also his hat and cape. Finally, he placed little Trixie in the basket and covered her. She had fallen quietly back to sleep. Still under the cover of darkness, he ran out into the city streets, to the one place he knew she would be safe.

Safe. And secret.

He arrived at the Lulamoon monastery. He looked down at her a final time. Tears ran freely down his cheek. He mourned for the time they would never have together. He kissed her one last time on the cheek. He was so scared for her. He didn't know what would happen after tonight for her. He wouldn't know what she grows up to be. He would never get to see the look on her face the day she learns her special talent and gets her cutie mark. He didn't know anything.

Well, he did know one thing. He had given her his magical talent, which was considerable in its own right. He knew he would have to claim magical impotence after today. A condition that afflicted some stallion unicorns after a certain age. But she had his magic now. He was surrounded by so much uncertainty. His future and hers. But he knew one thing for certain. He wrote it on a note and left it with the basket before clopping on the door loudly. He ran off, vanishing into the dark night, back to the hospital, hopefully before his wife awoke. A monk opened the door, retrieving the basket, reading the note.



You'll be Great and Powerful one day, Trixie.
Love, your Dad.

Comments ( 65 )

This doesn't really feel like an epilogue, but it is nice to get a well-written explanation for how Trixie came to be placed in an orphanage. Though now I need to go find some more Twixie to read.

Wow. Just......that was so beautiful:pinkiesad2:

1986016 It's actually a prologue. The title is meant to be coy. (see the very beginning of the 'Epilogue' chapter.)

It is touching to see how Trixie's dad gave his magic up to save his daughter. you wrote a beautiful story here. :pinkiesad2:

Loved it. Had been wondering why Trixie was separated from her family. Nice chapter, full of feels. Also, I agree with Nikita, it's snapped me into a Twixie mood...

Have a mustache :moustache:

that awkward moment when you realize Trixie is actually a zombie

:ajbemused:...
Now I see why you want to write a sequel. If Trixie has all of Mr. Sparkle's dark magic, it will show up sooner or later. In Trixie or her child.
:ajbemused:...
:flutterrage:WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO THAT ROUTE??!!:raritycry:

Wait for it.... wait for it..... and- *Final Mind Blow*

Great fic. I had to burn through this in a solid hour.

2079183 No. The spell exists, they find it in the library when they 'get some expertise' it just requires a high level of raw magic and innate knowledge of pony anatomy. So either one high level unicorn, or two working together.

2306329 In all the time this fic has been up you are literally the only one to have pointed out that reference!
Have +10 internets!

TWIST IS RIGHT! THAT IS THE WEIRDEST ROMANTIC SITUATION!

Necromancy.....How I love you. :pinkiecrazy:

"There. Who's a pretty pony?"

"I am." Trixie said, smiling again.

cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/24450906.jpg Best thing ever

I went and told my mom and sister about this story excitedly, like a little, annoying, baby girl to be exact, because of how much I loved this story. When I read this some time ago I loved it and still do. Liked and favorited. I actually hate Twixie by the way, but I really enjoyed this story. What pushed me to read this story was the title, the fact that you wrote it and mostly the fact that it said twist. I read it to learn what the twist was. And what a twist doozy it was! I am writing a story about Twilight and Trixie as sister, but it`s not going into the romance zone at all. At first I just came up with the idea and then I left it and let it collect dust. I read this and it inspired me to start writing it. In conclusion, stay pony my friends.

2637374 Thank you. My creativity gets me to start writing. But you, my fans, are why I keep writing. This particular story I'm very proud of, and I hope to return to it and embellish it in the future, adding in some scenes to smooth out the pacing and build more on character development. Your wonderful praise has expedited the coming of that event. Thank you all again.

2638373 I`m just excited that you replied to my comment!

2638640 (And that was when I realized that I had reached internet celebrity status.)

(stupid question in:3,2,1,)
since when are Trixie and twilight related?

2708594 I got the idea from Twilight's Father's cutie mark. The cresent moon is very similar to Trixie's.
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Huh, almsot missed this chapter. Post on previous chapter still stands :P

Ok, so maybe a wee bit more mindf- :twilightsheepish:

I can't tell if this story is bittersweet or just another way of saying "WINNING COUPLE!" in this fandom.:twilightsmile::heart:
It was interesting to read and the epilogue said "Don't be a chicken, take the risk and be done with it!":pinkiecrazy:
Good work.:trollestia:

Haven't started on this yet, but you had me at the chapter titles. :twilightsmile:

Welp, It may have been 47 weeks since I read this fic, but I was watching a video, and it made me think of this fic. (the whole incest thing)

3713301 A sequel is in the works for this one. (Shhh. It's a secret!)

what a twist, that's all I have to say about this story.

To be honest, I actually foresaw both the twist and the part in the epilogue.

This story moved like a speeding train but I'll be damned if I didn't say that I enjoyed it expremely in the short time it took to read it.

Also, this must be the first story in which the line "You are in a romantic relationship with a mare, who has turned out to be your biological sister, who is pregnant as the result of accidental incest with your/ her, brother. Yes?" Can be used in a relevant and serious context. And it made me lol like all hell XD

3887960 Twilight Sparkle is in a romantic relationship with Trixie Lulamoon, who has turned out to be her biological sister, who is pregnant as the result of accidental incest with their brother Shining Armor.

That pretty much sums up...

Still one of the most hilarious sets of plot twists (pun intended?) I have ever read.

:rainbowlaugh:

Because THESE....are the Ponies of Our Lives. *cue dramatic violin music*

All of these plot twists had 'soap opera' written all over them. I'm not a fan of soap operas. In fact, being forced to watch them most of my life alongside my grandmother gave me an unnatural hatred of them. To the point that Days of Our Lives is forever ingrained in my head as the most poorly-written schlock I've ever seen on television, right alongside all the other soap operas out there.

However, I did not hate this story! On the contrary, I loved it! I look forward to more from you.

4136561 A sequel to this has been in my to-do pile for like, ever.

4136561 no days of our lives is a terrible never reference it in my presence

So let's recap. Twilight is getting married to her stillborn twin-sister, who was resurrected by dark magic and is now pregnant with their older brother's foal... We need to go deeper! Not enough plot-twists! :pinkiecrazy:

4416754 my gerd.....
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Muhahahaha :pinkiehappy: This is the icing on the cake!

Now, THIS is going straight to my favourites. :twilightsmile:

4467641 The event probably had less of an impact with everything else that was going on around her. I would liken it to a grenade going off during the bombing of Dresden. Normally it's a big deal, but relative to everything else, it becomes more minor.

4556509 Yeah yeah, but really, it's such a minor bit. I just didn't need people going all 'Lol, they're going to have a tard baby!'

4575704 Thank you for your insight. I'll go back and rework that.

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