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You, a young human living in Canterlot, have never fit in with anyone. It's been years since you were found in Equestria, and you've become a small outcast in this world of ponies. Hiding away from everyone, you find solace in another strange being, a weird black bug-like filly that calls herself Chrysalis.

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Comments ( 442 )

I love it :heart::heart::derpytongue2: maybe you can read my story called my day in ponyville

Hm, interesting. Will check it out.

Just finished reading it, and I gotta say, you got something good here. A few mistakes, but nothing really noteworthy. Good pacing, and what you wrote gives a good introduction to the characters and the setting.

I look forward to read more about this story from you. Keep up the good work.

Favorite and upvote.

Ps: Have a moustache. :moustache:

Princess Chrysalis? After Cadance/Shining became a pair? Must find out what's going on here.

A promising start, though it could of expanded to give more detail here and there such as why he feels so alone even though it seems like everyone at this point is trying to make him feel wanted, and how they first met (I do have a feeling you'll expand on that on a later chapter).

Other than those minor points, I can't wait for more updates on this!


Who said anything about Shiny and Cadenza being a pair? They just so happen to be acquainted with Anon, they're both still fillies! (And that includes Chrissy!)

Hmmm, really interesting story you have here. I really want to see where you take this!


You have my attention.


i love it... plz sir: may i have another :pinkiehappy:

Cute and interesting, curious to see how things will play out.

This is interesting. Please continue.

wow, I was gonna leave as soon as I saw the second person POV. This was actually pretty good, congrats Ill be waiting! :pinkiehappy:


Haven't read it yet (will do tomorrow), but the premise seems quite intriguing.:twilightsmile:

guess a changeling likes me.........oh

I like it sept for one thing.
Why is he so dam moody? i could cut myself with all the edgyness your trying to make

1731246 yes he/she speeks the truth like he/she says i could cut my self from the moodynes

Well I feel like a dick now.

it get's better ever time

Dun dun dunn-wwaaaiiitttt how old is crissy?:rainbowlaugh:

Wanna bet they say, "this isn't what it looks like." Or some variation of that.


The ripe age of [REDACTED], which means she's only [REDACTED] year(s) [REDACTED]er than Anon. :raritywink:

:twilightangry2:y u [REDACTED] the ([€$¡#&%// DATA_EXPLUNDGE/]^¥\\)]}/[REDACTED]? Does this [REDACTED]the story or something?:rainbowlaugh::trollestia:[REDACTED]

Cadenza... why are you so annoying?

oooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo, someone's in trouble!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Oh snap! What's going to happen?

i bet 20 polar bears it going to be twilight :twilightsmile:


Send the Polar Bears to my P.O. Box. :pinkiehappy:

I'm gonna guess this is the last time Anon and Chrysalis see each other for some time, then Cadenza and Shining Armor get married and fate throws them together again.

hmmm. I'd flat out say fuck it and notify Celestia, I mean, at this point Chrissy could be, idk....friendly?

Im ok with Chrissy loving me.

Shit be hitting the fan soon yo.

I would counter Cadence's argument in an instant

Cadenza I don't LOVE YOU!!

I bet 21 pandas that Cadenza flops out>>1746976

Huh so Cadence was acting like Chrysalis at the wedding as a filly... and chrissy is acting like adult cadence... holy fuck... mind blown

So Cadenza is resorting to blackmail. Man, what a horrible pony.

1747953 take care of my polar bears:fluttercry:


Glad you're enjoying it! Might as well take this moment to thank everyone who's read it, commented, liked, what have you. You guys rock! Try my other stories too, if you're so inclined. I have (as of typing this) one other short story on my account, but more will be there in the future, I assure you.


Loving this story so far

Wow could this kid be any more of a brat? Celestia has taken care of him for half his life, and he blatantly shows her no respect.

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