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DougtheLoremaster


You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster

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This story is a sequel to The Foalsitter


It all began on a shopping trip with her cousin, Sunset Shimmer. Cadence saw through the illusionary magic of a young Chrysalis; who was only hunting for love-based emotions from memories. This simple moment set in motion a chain of events, that neither foresaw but both would never forget.

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Good bit of world building, I'd call it a prequel rather than a sequel, but it's fine either way. The writing itself is simple quality prose free of errors as far as I saw, which is refreshing in FanFiction.

I like where this AU is going, and would love to see it continued as an E or T rated series.

Given that in this world, Luna never became Nightmare Moon, this universe is even more alternative than I thought before.
although why did Cadance become the first contender for becoming an alicorn, and not Sunset?
why, at the first meeting, when she was revealed, Chrysalis so simply spoke about her people Cadance without even trying to hide something?

What kind of AU is this where everything seemed to go right? I love it! Luna's around which means Nightmare Moon never happened, Sunset is either Celestia's biological or adopted daughter and their relationship hasn't fallen out (yet, though given that Luna's here now...), Cadance and Sunset getting along and the latter not jealous of the former? I love it all! And Cadance and Chrysalis having some sort of relationship is just the cherry on top!

so... what happened between her and Luna/Celestia?

Very very cute, and very very interesting :twilightsmile:

D'awwww~

Oh the entire lineup are just full of kinky alicorns :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

ahfbauilhguishksjbsj THAT ENDING
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