Spike is tired. He's been awake for over a thousand years and now it is finally his turn to sleep, once he is tucked in by Twilight, one last time that is.
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DougtheLoremaster
You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster
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Dying together with someone who meant so much to you does sound like once of the few peacful was to die. A sad story, but I loved it nonetheless.
You're lucky you explained why Twilight 3.0 (aka, that pink unicorn from The Last Problem) was still around. Here I was thinking the author didn't think it through.
Wouldn't be the first time it's happened. Not sold on Luster being an alicorn though. But it was a good story at least.
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<3 glad you enjoyed it.
Right in the feels. So beautiful.
Great job.
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That's a very cynical approach to my writings. Though I am glad you enjoyed my tale. <3
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<3 glad you enjoyed it~
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It's common sense. The description gave no reason why Luster would still be around, and if the story hadn't, then it doesn't help me enjoy it.
Since it did explain why she was, I can like it.
Nice.
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Glad you enjoyed it. <3
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I have a similar fic in mind myself. I've already made on along these lines where Twilight is not immortal but just lives longer. I would prefer that over immortality.
As for this story. Ive added it to my list and should get to it in a day or two. I look forward to reading it.
The Monk
“I mean, you just seem to walk in random directions most of the time. How do you ever get to where you're going?" "Oh, that's easy," said Candy with a smile, ”I just make the place I end up, the place I wanted to be all along." There was an extended moment of silence. ”That... that's absolutely brilliant," -Trick Question
To quote one of my favorite movies, the Green Mile:
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agreed. It's even longer when you are there by their side as they reach the destination. <3 glad you enjoyed.
This was a beautiful story
I didn’t expect to cry today, but it was cathartic. It was kind... it was beautiful...and to the Twilight and Spike in your story I hope they sleep well, their friends were probably waiting for them.
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I like to think they were too. A very well deserved rest. Have a blessed day.
After all these years they do deserve this very sad and but sweet moment 😢
Man that hit me hard.
Also another fic where Twilight immortal isn’t seems in a bad like, awesome. Great job my dude. Twilight and Spike’s relationship has always been one of the strongest in the show for me, and knowing that thought time they would always be side by side is such a great image for me
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From the start to the end, both have walked hoof in claw. Now the next adventure awaits them. Glad you enjoyed it. I like to imagine the girls threw them a 'Reunion' party...and Pinkie went crazy with party supplies she has no business having in that scenario.
That was a great although bittersweet story
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I'm glad you enjoyed it~
All journeys have an end, no? At least they shared it with each other.
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That’s a nice image for sure
What an incredible piece of work. Heartbreaking but amazing to read. One of the few fics that has actually made me cry
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<3
I'm not crying, you're crying!
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*hugs* there, there...
Damn, this hit hard.
Very sweet story :)
My only suggestion would be not to stick to canon too close i guess. Making up ancestors or... Just having them main pones do something else? Ocellus and Smolder might opened a dress shop or so xD
Who knows. A few simple lives. Doesn't mean they are any less fulfilling...
Still. Lovely 🌹
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Except this story takes place in a projected continuation of canon.
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Fair enough :)
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I do like the idea of smolder x ocellus and a dress shop, but this story was not the setting for such a fun concept. I may try out that idea in later tales In a more...romantic setting. This was about the reader understanding Spike had seen them all just come and go and it was finally his turn to join them on the other side.