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Rainbow Dash is an extremely talented flier with many friends. But her assertive disposition and popularity may not be a coincidence. Perhaps she just imagines these things about herself...

Cover image by Pony4444 on dA, edited by me.

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Comments ( 50 )

Awesome. I love insane pony stories like this.

Let's go mad.

That was excellent...:pinkiegasp:

Wow depressing.

I... really don't know what to think about this.

1695290 I KNOW :raritydespair: HE HAS TOO MUCH FREE TIME

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what, no comment about me being everywhere? fine... :raritywink:

WHAT THE FUCK!!!???

1695341 No, I see him more often than I see you, sooooooo
CANTERLOTGUARDIAN

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oh lord I'm so using that. thank you!

1695385 Your welcome. I made that actually.

I didn't read this yet, but I will shortly. I saw Rainbow Dash and Doctor Whooves. My favorite mane 6 and background. Can't wait to read it so I shall start. :twilightsmile:

And now that I finished... My reaction was like :rainbowhuh: And I am now so very confused if she is dreaming or not...

1695661 One of the two realities is in Rainbow Dash's head. :trollestia:

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"I would have never guessed," tastetheRainbowDash said sarcastically.

1695717 I like being vague when I write. Better to let the readers make their own assumptions. :pinkiecrazy:

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With that simple explanation, you make a great author. A+ for you. :twilightblush:

Surprised this is a one-shot -- it seems like it should have a few more chapters.

1696043 I don't like writing multi-chapter stuff. The last one I wrote started out well, but ended really randomly and had severe Lavender Unicorn Syndrome. Long story short (pun intended), I don't like to stick to one idea for long.

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Well you always need to know where you are going -- I did not think this would be best as something LONG just that it could really use two more chapters. It feels incomplete.

Reminds me of Shutter Island

This broke my heart.
POOR RAIN DANCE!!!
You're stil my favorite pony! :raritycry:

Eep! Freaks me our for reasons best kept to me... :pinkiecrazy:
Quite good though... Very creepy.
And did anyone else imagine the mental hospital as a dungeon?

Mmmmmm this fanfic is sexy good...:twilightsmile:

The main chorus fits the story, in my opinion that is.

you really dont know if she's still dreaming, or if the mental institution is the dream. I LIKE IT!

Hi there. I hope you don't mind but I liked this fic so much I have put together an audio version on YouTube.

Awesome story, classic horror one. Sometimes I dunno if the world I live in is real too :rainbowderp:

4158886 I just managed to get into my account and found this comment... 10,000 VIEWS!! :rainbowkiss:

jeez. heard scribbler's reading and... man. that's cruel to dash.

a good story though, if cruel

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I agree. I liked that approach in Umineko and I liked that approach here. Letting the audience form their own opinions is more interesting.

Creepy but interesting. Which part is a dream is something we may never know. Great job. :3

These kinds of stories freak me out.

Your entire life is a lie!!!

This was quite the read. My reaction, in second person...
*This story has reawoken an old hunger, and left a good taste in your mouth
*You wait calmly for Asylum to update, for now at least.

Experiment No. One: The Rainbow Dance Initiative

Hi, I was wondering what Rain Dance actually looks like, perhaps like Rainbow but with busted up wings and no cutie mark, or entirely different?

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