This story is a sequel to End
As more creatures across Equestria disappear, a lone mare uses a microphone to let out a plea for help to anypony who would be willing to give her aid in her desperate time of need.
Now has a dramatic reading thanks to ObabScribbler!
This is a side-story to Falter
As with End, this was written primarily for me to flex my creative muscles and see what I can do in around 1,000 words with this sort of premise. Same warnings apply for End as they do here, but I highly recommend that you read that one first.
Also, I highly recommend listening to the dramatic reading if you get the chance.
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Eh, it was alright, though personally I think my issue with it is because of the fact that it's an OC and not someone I know like Twi, ya know?
It ain't bad, not bad at all, just didn't have the zing, pow, kaboom or slap to the 'feels' that the last one had.
Signed,
--Pyro The Faithful Reader
These little snippets may extend to a who solid universe in itself, who knows.
Another erh, well written?
Well placements of statics.
In all seriousness, this was an awesome look in the mind of another desperate survivor in this apocalyptic mess. There's even a little bit of world building eh, quite awesome. Using an unknown character adds to it's mysterious premise, which is also nice, although I would think that using one of the mane 6 or the fan favorites would also have it's quirks. I'm sorry but I couldn't help but giggle at how well placed the statics are for the reader's inconvenience, might as well make it: "My name is [BUY SOME APPLES]." However this story alone did open up endless possibilities for this universe, all because of your manipulations of the distortions.
I give it a mustache out of 10.
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I have to admit, this one was actually a whole lot more interesting to read. The original was your standard epistolary, so it didn't quite hit me as hard as it might have intended to, but this one was far more disturbing... and I like that...
Well done!
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I don't think it ever says it ISN'T Twilight... Who knows? Twilight went pretty insane at the end of the story.
4416591 Who knows with fiction, maybe it is Twi? At this point though, nah, it ain't a positive or a negative so I'm going to assume it ain't Twilight. Doesn't make too much of a difference.
Seriously, a longer work maybe to go into a bit more detail as to what is happening would be nice. (Even a tease or something.)
After reading this trilogy, it's left me with so many questions. Would life ever start up somehow again a gazillion years later (probably less or more) after something like this? Would everyone just suddenly come back eventually? Why did something like this ever start happening in the first place? More importantly, WHERE DID THEY ALL DISAPPEAR TO?
I just want more from this subject! Great fanfic trilogy! 
............................. No............ This is horrible this story made me so sad and hopeless still get a like
Okay, now this was awesome. It might actually be a little hard to read, but it was just crying out to be read aloud anyway, and that thing Scribbler did is amazing. :D
This fic inspired me to make this song. You can find it here: https://youtu.be/Y5XUi5bo5UQ