Have you ever had Coca Cola? Don't be silly, of course you have! But do you remember your first time? This is the story of Pinkie Pie's, told in first-pony in present-tense. Just a little one-shot I wrote in an hour or so.
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^This entire story.
It was entertaining, but I wish there was more detail.
Wait, there's a Disneyland in Equestria? Neat! And man, I'd hate to see Pinkie drink coffee or Mountain Dew.
It's a good short. I've never actually drank Coca-Cola in my life, before, though. Carbonated drinks make me puke. Also: So much pink...
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I had a friend like you once... he was dutch.
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So I'm not alone in the world? Wonderful!
Good Story and that is exactly how I imagine Pinkie's thought pattens to be
Three days later, Twilight isolated the benzoylmethylecgonine from the solution and synthesized an ounce of crystallic cocaine... Which she felt compelled to share with her friends. And this is how Equestria was made.
AHHHH! I HATE COCA COLA!!!!
*thumbs up*
Good story, BTW.
Great, now I feel the urge to drink Coca-Cola
But seriously, good job, this was pretty funny to read
Good persanal thoughts-It was funny the fact you made references to episodes was funny I also liked the concept, on Pinkie trying Coca Cola, she was funny in this fanfic that she can't tell what the taste of Cola is is comady gold. She was just funny in general actually mainly the begining when she was lossing her train of thought and when she was jumping on the trampoline.
Bad persanal thoughts-I persanally didn't like that you didn't show that she had extra energy, maybe say she was feeling shaky but not in the since of her Pinkie sense, she felt like she would burst if she didn't move, that would have shown that she has more energy then usual.
Over all-Over all the story was both plesant and fun to read I look forward if you write another story like that like Mountain Dew, Pepsi, or even coffee, that would be really funny. Over all I give it six sheepish Twilights
out of ten 
Good job looking forward to your next funny story.
I have never had Coca Cola, because I can't stand anything fizzy. However, this story was still fun! Have a "like"!
Oh my gosh! I read your story with my Pinkie Pie voice and it was amazing! Check out my fanfic read of your story.
I hope you enjoy!
It was so awesome, I had to do it!