• Member Since 12th Jun, 2012
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electreXcessive


I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

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Twilight and Spike want a treat, but it seems difficult to get at the delicious contents! Follow their efforts as they go through methods both unorthodox and extreme to gain sustenance!

Author's Notes: Alright guys, so this fic is actually a collaborative effort between two authors. One being myself, and the other one being KillerSteel, whose user page can be found here.

Honestly, the guy is one amazing dude, and was a huge help in writing this fic, so if you like it, please stop by his user page and let him know that you liked it. Stop by his user page and maybe give him a watch, because honestly, he deserves it.

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Comments ( 19 )

EXPLOSIVE CYLINDERS EVERYWHERE, OH BABY :heart:

Poetic majesty. I doubt we will ever see a work of this magnitude in our lifetimes.

Luz

Wow this.... this story is amazing. Gotta give credit to both of you guys for writing this awesome story!

Btw... DAT ENDINGdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png

I guess this story had a... happy ending after all:trollestia:

Yes. Done re-reading Rainbow Factory, now this god-send. Thank you.

for a second I thought it was OC X twilight and the OC's name was Killsteel I almost sh** myself in fear. :facehoof:


Good story though! :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for the support! I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

:rainbowlaugh: I thought I had it figured out at;

Spike sighed, sittting down in a chair, holding the cylinder in his claws.

But I was wrong. Good show!

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Glad you enjoyed it! And thank you so much for the support, it means a lot! :twilightsmile:

I thought the cylinder was one of those party crackers where you pull both ends and it explodes. Boy was I wrong. Good little story you two wrote.

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Co-Author Killer Steel here.

Don't worry, I'm not THAT insane. I'm insane, but I could never be THAT insane!

If I ever do a self-insert, it'd be a joke. That, or it'd be my upcoming HiE that I might or might not write. 'Day One' is one that's very similar to my own concept, only the mode of travel is different.

Not everyone's happy going to Equestria.

Niiiice!
So I'm guessing this is where the idea for the writing thing came about?

Oh... dear..... god..... MY SIDES! :rainbowlaugh:

It wasn't quite subtle enough for me to be dragged into the innuendo. Not like some others.

I followed their efforts, and it was glorious! :rainbowlaugh:

Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash has her ear pressed flat up against the front door.

hahaha! pure gold :rainbowlaugh:

*Grins* I confess my immediate thought was they were trying to open to old kinderegg toy containers :rainbowlaugh:

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